Rainbow Dash is late for her weekly meeting with Fluttershy leading to unexpected consequences. Rated for near rape and violence.
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wow keep going
2988061 Thanks. I know my grammar isn't the best, but I have trouble trusting others with my work, a fic (Not pony's) that I wrote over on fanfiction.net nearly got ruined as someone I let edit completley tore the story apart - re-writing it, and completely changing the story - plot - everything.
Not to mention what happened when I did trust someone to edit this story - see my earlier comments
From that day on I've refused to let anyone else edit my stories. so I apologise for the bad grammar, but I take on board what you've said, and will try to do better with my writing.
As for updates - it all depends on my health, I've just recently come out of a "Bad patch" and 'seem' to be hitting a good spell. However it can easilly drop again. I have got a few problems plus chronic pain on top, so when I need my full strength pain killers I end up pretty much in lala land.
3026925 thanks. best is with the story that inspired this even I don't know what gave my muse the idea of an orphanage twist/subplot. I'm just rolling with it
Fist I want to say, I really hope you feel better. It sucks being sick. I think you write very well, very few grammatical errors. Wow, what type of evil orphanage does Ponyville have, the story has gotten really interesting!
Can't wait to see this!!