Rainbow Dash is late for her weekly meeting with Fluttershy leading to unexpected consequences. Rated for near rape and violence.
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Great chapter. There goes any desire for sex from that freak.
The one problem I have with this fic is the sheer barbarity and bloodlust everyone's showing in howling for the rapist's balls. It really doesn't feel very ponylike at all. This is a setting where they set out to reform Discord, after all. It feels bizarre that Hunting Fire would be seen solely as someone to be punished, rather than someone as badly in need of treatment as Fluttershy was after being attacked by him.
I guess I simply can't see the Equestrian justice system being so archaic and retributive.
2967859 I do understand your point of view and if I was trying to keep it all nicey-nicey then yeah his punishment wouldn't have seemed as severe, but I've written it to a degree of how I would deal with people like Hunting Fire if it were up to me.
It is for this level of grittiness that I put the mature tag on, and to be completely honest because of the initial attack and the way in which the punishment happened I am considering adding the gore tag on as well.
Thanks for taking the time to comment![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
2967740 I think he lost the desire when RD started the process in Chapter 1. LOL![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
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Take this in mind: Did Discord ever actually cause any kind of real harm to anyone? All he did was invert/change personalities, directly and indirectly, and cause basically chaotic, but non-harmful shenanigans. Last I checked he did not try to rape anypony as well as commit any other kind of crime that would cause any kind of outrage.
2968161 agreed, Discord just enjoys randomness, and his most harmful act, the inverting personalities was only to prevent the use of the elements of harmony against him.
2968161 - Thanks for putting in to words the other thoughts i wanted to put but didn't know quite how to phrase.![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
2969030 - agreed![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
2981470 - thanks, health is slowly going back to 'Normal' for me, all being well I'll hit a good spell soon![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
looking forward to more of this, when do you think you'll be able to update?
though, there are parts where there should be a new paragraph between the different ponies speaking/thinking and punctuation when a pony is speaking and when a pony is thinking.(some of the sentences and stuff kind of got put together)
I'd suggest adding an apostrophe before and after a ponies thought, just to make the difference clear for the reader.
like I said looking forward to the next chapter.
Wow this chapter was conflicting, in a good way. I was so sad for Pinkie Pie and her hint of her confession, it was sad to hear. Then she perked back up and was all smiles again, very Pinkie indeed. The branding and gelding scene was dark though. It is hard to imagine Ponyville acting so vengeful, but I guess he showed no remorse and in fact liked the idea of hurting another. It was just a hard scene to read, and it really makes you think about how people are punished. And although I think it may be too harsh, how would a parent feel if their child was raped. Good thing this is just fiction. Then I was laughing again at Rarity's reactions, and of course Cadence's look of wanting a baby. But the part with Scootaloo was so sad, and then about the orphanage. I was like DAMN, this is messed up!
All and all, a very good read, and you have a wonderful way of setting the tone and making the reader really feel for the characters. I know I had a similar idea for my fic, altough not going as far. Just want to say, well done!