How about 4209aNmvL?" Luna asked. Steampine nodded, but a certain pony approached him before he got to pull the letter. "Hey Luna!" He said with much enthusiasm. "We have good news!"
"Do tell." Luna said.
"Rumor goes around that Celestia had joined an alliance with the changelings, now called the Changeling Swarms! Isn't that great?!" He said with a huge smile.
"Serina, you idiot! That's bad news!" Steampine said. He sat there for a moment, then it finally went through him. "Oh...bad news. Right, I meant to say bad news. Still great though, right?" Serina asked.
Serina was a odd and random pony who either breaks down, or freezes when focusing. Her mane was a navy blue, but slowly change into ice blue at the very end. And don't get me started about the light.
She hates even the tiniest light and she'll get ticked. This, however, does not include light bulbs.
"Not really. This is bad, anypony here could be a changeling!" Luna said worriedly.
"Relax! I know one pony who can detect changelings!" Serina said.
"Who?" Luna asked.
"King Gryphus!" Serina said. Luna frowned in anger at the moment.
"We don't speak that kind of language here." Luna ordered. She turned away from Serina and she frowned. "Princess Luna, what happened between you and the-"
"Watch your tone." Luna said sternly. Steampine quickly shut his mouth and pulled the lever. The machine twist and turned, sparked and smoked, and finally...the purple portal was seen. "Get me Midnight Dream and Midnight Shadow. We're leaving in a few minutes," Luna said.
Steampine nodded and he left the room. Serina, however, wasn't ready to leave yet. "Wy are you so mad at Gryphus?" Serina asked.
"Not mad...just...I can't trust him." Luna said.
"But...he's just any normal pony." Serina said.
"He's...technically not a pony." Luna said. One of the mane six came into the room with her lunar gear on. "Yer majesty, heard that you was leavin'. Might need some extra strength, in my opinion." Applejack said, holding her spear in one hoof.
"Pleasant to see you to, Applejack." said Luna, then stepping towards her. "Guess thy could use some extra strength in case...of emergency's. You may." Luna said. Applejack cheered in happiness as she threw her hat down.
"Knew you would say that!" Applejack said. Luna smiled as she cheered. This has made her remember her childhood. How they laugh...and play. But now...time to get serious. Applejack put on her hat and she saw both Midnight Shadow and Midnight Dream. "Come on. Let's go." Luna said.
Blazing Dawn came in through the door with serious urgent news. "Your majesty, it seems we have...bad news." Dawn says.
Blazing Dawn was a male pegasus that was a hard working pony. He's a fun guy when he's not doing anything, but when in combat...just pray to Luna or Celestia your cutie mark stays intact! Anyways, he's a crimson red (or up close sun red) and his mane and tail's has yellow covering his head to the other half, and red on the half to the tip of the hair.
"Pray tell." Luna says.
"It appears that one of Chrysalis changelings disguised themselves to get in the Lunar Republic, and saw something that will make the battle unfair." Dawn says.
"And what might that be?" Celestia asked.
"The PD 3000, or Portal Dimension 3000. It appears that it will take you to different dimensions and have more species than here on Equestria!" Dawn says.
Celestia stares with a motherly heart and soothes him with her hoof. "We'll think of something. As a matter of fact, where's Chrysalis?" Celestia asked.
"In the garden room, trying to produce...more changelings." Dawn says with a very strong shiver.
"Um, your highness." asked a pony.
"Yes Snowfire?" Celestia asked.
"Which way is the bathroom?" Snowfire begged.
Snowfire, a very lovable dude, but is usually clumsy. His knoggin is strong enough to cause the world to tear in half. He's a green dude with a orange mane and tail. By the way...2 rules: One, don't feed him soda. If you do, time freezes and he's able to win the war with a snap. 2: Never...ever...EVER...give him a flamethrower. If you do...you might want to move in another dimension...or galaxy!
"Down the hall, take a left." Celestia said.
"Thanks!" Snowfire said and he took off. Chrysalis came back with 1000 changelings coming from the garden room.
"O...kay. Chrysalis, can you command two of your changelings to enter the Lunar Republic and see the planes for the PD 3000?" Celestia asked.
"PD 3000?" Chrysalis asked.
"Portal Dimension 3000." Celestia said.
"Fine. Mark! Daje!" Chrysalis called. Two changelings came up with donut crumbs all over their mouth. She sighed in frustration and she pointed at the exit. "Grab the plans or...whatever how they built the PD 3000." She said.
The changelings nodded and left the Solar Empire. "Hey..." said Chrysalis, now a smile creeping upon her face. "What happens if Shining Armor figures out that theirs a war?"
"If he ever finds out...all of Equestria breaks lose." Celestia said.
"Huh?"
"If Shining Armor finds out, well, he's the reason why he was strictly downgraded to a guard."
"What do you mean?"
"He was captain. Captain of all guards. But when he had to fight a griffon...he...he nearly killed him and used his legs for...food." Celestia finished.
"Wait...are you saying that if he finds out theirs war-?!"
"He will turn into command mode by his sleeping cells and try to kill us all." Celestia said, then facing to her. "Why do you ask?"
"Oh...no reason." Chrysalis said and her smile slowly faded.
WERE ALL DOOMED!!
"Shining Armor." said a crystal knight, running towards him tired. "Message for you."
"Oh, thanks." Shining Armor said. He read the small note...then his sleeping cells...we're awake.
"Спальный клеток на. Сейчас готова уничтожить Эквестрию." Shining Armor said.
"Uh...excuse me?" the knight asked.
"Tell the crystal ponies to gear up. We're heading to war." Shining Armor said.
"Oh...um...yes sir." the knight said as he took off. Shining Armor's wife, Cadence, came into view. "What's going on? I see a whole bunch of guards lining up." Cadence asked.
"Luna and Celestia has gone to war. Teaming up with Chrysalis. We must stop them." Shining Armor said.
"Oh no. I'll go write a note to Luna." Cadence said and took off. Now...time for a logo for the Crystal Empire. He grabbed the flag hidden by his throne chair and kissed the flag proudly.
"Теперь, чтобы привести в глупые охранники, господство над Эквестрию, то сбросить атомную бомбу на него, как ненавистники сказал. Я выполню план моего хозяина и sabatoge пони, затем убить все пони в мире!" Shining Armor said.
But...from the depth's of the Crystal Empire.
So...it seems that we have a war going on. Canterlot is the best place to take over. Sombra said. He forms a crystal small enough to cause a huge explosion, making room for him to move. Ah...that's better. He said.
I can take Canterlot over. But I have to stay low. But...I wonder what's happening with...the Solar Empire. Sombra asked.
A screen showed the Solar Empire, but accidentally joined a conversation with Celestia and a pony. "It appears that one of Chrysalis changelings disguised themselves to get in the Lunar Republic, and saw something that will make the battle unfair." the pony said.
"And what might that be?" Celestia asked.
"The PD 3000, or Portal Dimension 3000. It appears that it will take you to different dimensions and have more species than here on Equestria!"
Sombra laughed at this...accidental conversation and shut down the screen. So...it seems they heard of this...PD 3000, and soon...it would be mine! Plus, I shall call my team...the Sombra Empire! He said as he drew a picture.
Now...how do I get out of here? Sombra asked himself.
Hey friend, I'd just like to say "a-wall" isn't correct. It's actually spelled "AWOL". I know a lot of people get turned off by this kind of thing in the description, so I figured I give you a hand.
Have a nice day!
Oc time!
Name: Far Sky
Race: Pegasus
Coat: Red with a dark yellow and dark orange mane. Red wings
CM: Crosshair
Faction: New Lunar Republic
Short Bio: Grew up in middle class Cloudsdale, always being dared to race older pegasi, rarely losing. Got his weapons license at the youngest age possible. Keeps his calm, but often has a lack of sleep. Hates hand grenades.Agile, quick-thinking
Weapons: Hoof-held pistol, knife, and scoped rifle.
No former military experience.
DOSE THIS INVOL DISCORD
2887185 No spoils bro...no spoils.
well I WILL FLOOD YOU'R HOUS WITH CHOCOLET PUDING THEN
2887526 No...fill it with chocolate milk.
So Midnight Dream, Luna, and I get to kill some fire nation soldiers?
psst, nicely done, but serina is a mare, and quite dangerous, if not , inquisitive . nice job tho
2888424 Give it time. Did this a little late due to the votes.
2887914 fine I will but I will be boiling chocolaot milk be afrad of my power be vary afrad
Just got to say. The story setup, flow, and grammar of chapter 4 feels extremely improved compared to the first three chapters. Good Job!
And remember everypony. If you don't want your OC or votes lost in these comments, go to The Solar Empire vs New Lunar Republic Chat Group and post them in the designated threads. Easier for LikeaBaws to manage and see them as well.
Yay! You're gonna use Midnight dream!
2856653 Yes she is a mare
2890879 Important question, has she ever worked, opened retired, or is she new?
2885862 Thanks dude! Never knew that.
2889615 No dude! Just regular...chocolate...milk!
2888424 Depends if Avatar got himself in trouble, no spoilers.
2899461 fine ( snaps his lion hand finger tips ) there enjoy your chocolate milk :flutterrage
2890879 well she was one of luna's guards but she never had any war experience
2901167 thanks.
2901292 You're welcome
Well after some thought,
Serina, IS the Inquisition of the NLR , yes the 40k kind
If you need the pesonality of an inquisitor, here ill go detail
With the purpose of seeking out and terminating any and all sources of "heresy" the ordo hereticus agents are colder and more distrusting than any other agents , if you try to kill them , the will never trust you , branded into the leather of her flank guard among her 3 seals , are the words "the eye that sleepeth not" and her idealism of "PURGE" "HOLY" and "FIND AND DESTROY THE UNHOLY FIEND OF WHICH ENTERED THE GROUNDS OF WHICH I GUARD" Serina should be out finding the changeling , but is occupied with fixing her power sword , yes , it goes alight with dancing blue fire. Once fixed , she can smite even the best trained of fighters, don't start on the hidden bolt pistol of hers. 10 bolts and only 10 , fail safe basically . Reply if you need the armour design
hey guys it me BADCzebra I've been planning on a couple projects so I haven't been on awhile except for constant OC changing (seriously I need to make up my mind) but anyways its good to be back on track with the story and the comments
Name- Carbon Bass
Race-Pegasus
Coat- Light green/black
Eyes-Nice slick crimson eyes
mane/tail-light green/black
cutie mark- biohazard with a lightning bolt going through
Faction-New Lunar Republic
weapons-two slick metal daggers and a long bow.
Clothing- a thick leather robe with a nice mask.
bio-Carbon was raised in the pish posh higher class of Canterlot he hated it.He was kicked out of everywhere since he had no home he decided to help join in the republic.
training- not trained
any questions ask me.
Here's my OC
Name: Scarlett
Race: Earth Pony
Coat color: Lime green
Mane and tail color: Red
Cutie mark: a pencil
Team: New Lunar Republic
Personality: Very talkative, smart, and brave.
No military experience.
my OC:
Name: Thorin.
Team: The New Lunar Republic.
Race: Pegasus.
Coat: Light Brown.
Mane: Black.
Cutiemark: An Axe.
Previous Military experience: Good handle with; Knifes, Swords, Bow, Pistol, Rifle, Shotgun.
Fav Weapon: Shotgun.
umm may i submit another oc ( a griffin oc) if so Heres the info (sorry if i seem in a rush im just VERY impatient)
Name: Silver Dawn
Type: Griffin
Looks: Here's a link to a picture of her http://noisykitty13.deviantart.com/art/Silver-dawn-the-griffin-391788991?ga_submit_new=10%253A1376003245 ALSO YOU CAN SEE MIDNIGHT DREAM IN MY GALLERY ( Umm Also Silver is blind)
Personality: Well mannered, Quick thinking, Skittish, Tomboyish, Friendly, and A bit overly obsessed with Gummy bears
Experience: No War experience
Side: Lunar
Job: Unemployed
Gender: Female
Family: Has no known family
Talent: using a Sword in a fight
Likes: Water, Gummy bears, Flying, Swimming, Swordfighting, Cats, Storms, and well... Clouds.
Dislikes: Bullies, Hot Sauce, Timberwolves, Gummy worms ( strangely), and Show-offs.
Strategy: Using her short, but sharp sword.
What her sword looks like: Dark red handle, And the sword is short but VERY sharp
If you read that, i congradulate you
Спальный клеток на. Сейчас готова уничтожить Эквестрию. = Sleeping cells. Now ready to destroy Equestria.
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