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Celestia and Luna have a argument so big, they aren't even called Sisters anymore. Now Equestria is joining the army to vote who is the best ruler: Celestia, or Luna? War is among us, and Luna has found a way into the human world...as well as Celestia. Now with a huge crossover with humans, video games, and anything else you can think of, the war will get bigger and stronger. Here's the bad part: when the Mane Six tried to join the army to stop their distruction, they are put on different sides, and slowly losing their friendship.

Will the Mane Six be able to fix their friendship and stop war once and for all? Will the Solar Empire win the war? Will the New Lunar Republic win this war? And who else is coming to battle? Read this amazing and very long story as you discover...who wins.

YUP! This means, put your OC's bronies, because this...is going to be a very...very huge story. Featuring any cartoon that comes into the story. When you see anything that has green, that means you get to pick which is a good idea. Do you vote for the Solar...or Lunar...or any other team that appears?

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OC- Yin and Yang, usually called Yin or Yang

Gender- male

Race- unicorn

Cutie mark- yin yang symbol

Mane color- black

Coat color- white

Personality- always childish but when it's needed, really serious such as when violence is needed

Job- selling plants/herbal remedies made with stuff from the Everfree Forest

Skills- highly advanced martial arts, ingenuity, and extreme intelligence/knowledge in everything including how to use any and every weapon with skill, often using brain over brawn. Basically the average, scrawny, parkour, ninja, karate/kung fu nerd

Side- Neither. He tries to avoid conflict and lives on the outer ring of the Everfree Forest in a hoof-made hut. When someone tries to recruit him, Yin/Yang refuses. When they try to force him, Yin/Yang fights them off, even if the recruiter has a ranged/melee weapon and or comes with any number of help short of an army

Favorite weapon- rope dart but is able to use anything as a weapon. Extremely skilled with rope darts because it is how he defends himselves from timberwolves

Armor- none as arrmor would hinder his fighting ability

Experience in war- none but is extremely capable due to martial arts

I'm a bit new to this...

Okay, question : I can suggest a cartoon/TV show, and if you're okay with it, I might see them in the story...?
How does Avatar : The Last Airbender sound?

It seemed like it took 10 (9) seconds for Luna and Celestia to go full out war on each other...Sibling (or not anymore) rivalry goes out of hand very quickly for royalty, no?

Sup?
like the story , so here have my me!
OC,
name : Serina, Warrick

Gender, Female

Race , Pegasus

cutie mark, Crimson Rbx 170,(its a bass guitar) flanked by 6 small wings

mane color, starts off Royal blue and fades into an electric icy blue.

coat color, paper white.

Personality, Random, odd, and sometimes breaks down, or freezes into focus

Job, part time weather mare stand in, full time waitress at a cafe

skills (beware, twilight mode!!)
thanks to being raised in a roaming family of Earth pony gypsies, Serina was introduced to the world of agriculture and witchcraft gifting her the ability of strength and chemical/mineral combination prowess,(AKA alchemy of some description) she possesses large fan like wings, she cant fly fast nor can she out maneuver, but she can outlast and out endure other pegasi, she has sharp sight , smell and hearing thanks to her mysterious origins, oh and her boots allow her to grapple onto surfaces.

favorite/preferred weapon,
lances, bows, small explosives,or her ultimate weapon, a staff

Armour, serina is equipped with a lightly armored flight suit, and helmet,

side, she fights for the NLR as she always hated the day.

Experience, Serina is a mysterious pony , being trained in passive aggressive, hoof to hoof, survival, and ranged attacks, her fighting style is perfected and tempered, with some back breaking force behind her strikes.

think of her as an air to ground mare-ine
(pssst , Ex inquisitor!!!)

OC-Blink

gender-male

race-unicorn

cutie mark- black tattered circle

coat-pure white

mane/tail-Dark brown

job-Caravan

personality/lifestyle- I still have better enhanced abilities beyond the pony folk I predicted they would fight so I already knew which faction I needed to take from now on they guide themselves but the moon guides me

side-I pledge myself to the lunar republic

used weapons-all types of blade no matter

armor-red snow hide robes

Comment posted by Taxes deleted Jul 9th, 2013
Comment posted by Taxes deleted Jul 9th, 2013

Here, have another OC!

Name: Steampine

Gender: Male

Type: Pegasus

Looks: [profile pic] (the cutie mark is a wrench, and the hat is supposed to be a fedora) (here's what I used to make him: http://browse.deviantart.com/art/Pony-Creator-Full-Version-254295904)

Occupation: Inventor

Personality: He is highly intelligent and loves to laugh, but he is very socially awkward, and thus does not have many friends. He's okay with speaking to one pony, but when others join the conversation he kind of just fades out of it. He can also learn new concepts and techniques very quickly. His mind works in three dimensions, and uses images instead of numbers and graphs, thus making his job easier (and increases his skills as a tactician).

Skills: He is fast, and has learned some (and I say some) martial arts techniques from one of his friends. He can also come up with new ideas quickly, but are often quite abstract. He can be a tactician though. His inventions will come in handy, too.

Side: He has yet to join a side, and he'll have a hard time choosing when he's forced to. Though he is slightly compelled to join The New Lunar Republic, as he is fond of new ideas.

Weaponry: Whatever he has on hand, he is quite resourceful. But he usually has his concealed auto-targeting shoulder cannon.

Armor: He will wear different kinds of armor based on the situation he knows he's going into, but when not in combat, he prefers not to wear armor.

Experience in War: None prior to current events.

at the ending change "their" to "there".... Just saying :twilightsmile:

steampie you perfectly made an OC that I was going to make but decided not to BROHOOF /)

Comment posted by Dat Wandolf deleted Jul 9th, 2013

Name: Night Eyes.

Gender: Female.

Type: Bat Pegasus.

looks: Typical Bat pony (dark gray coat, light gray mane and tail and yellow cat-like eyes) with a scar going over each of her eyes and the tip of her right ear has been bitten off . She has a slender but trained body. Cutie Mark is a night sky with two clouds in the background with starts and an eye instead of a moon.

Occupation: A mercenary camp located in the Foal Mountains.

Personality: Night eyes is the kind of pony who wants to have things done her way and have very little respect for others than herself, her own kind and the band of mercenaries she is working with. She sees herself as a leader although its clear as the sun burns that she has no leader skills whatsoever. her temper is quite short and is easily angered. She loves to show off her skills in air combat and prove that she is superior than the others around her. This often get her in all kinds of trouble both on the battlefield and sometimes with her superior officers. She often wears a sinister smile.

Skills: A very skilled flier, capable of great speed and great maneuverability. She is have great skills in the use of spears, dual swords and throwing knives. she can, like many other bat ponies, see in the dark and she have great hearing too.

Job: Mercenary.

Side: The one who pays the most.

Weaponry: Dual swords, spear and throwing knives.

Armor: Many small light and thin steel plates put together with leather straps to form a hole armor which gives her a little protection without sacrificing to much speed and maneuverability.

Experience in War: Way to much for a pony.

2847475 Sounds great!

Dude, if you put a donut between to cops or two fat dudes, it could mean war for them in less than five seconds.

It's not that hard man :derpytongue2:

(Third Time. I sometimes like making OCs similar to Superheroes from Comic Books. Sorry if my Personality attempt is very noobish like)
OC: Overheat Mane

Superhero Nickname: 'Mecha Colt'

Gender: Male

Race: Earth Pony

C-Mark: Steel Gear

Coat: Amber

Mane/Tail: Charcoal Black

Personality: Nerdy and Young, cautious and tactical in battles, Has few friends, very determined to completing something even the smallest tasks or things harder. He sometimes wants to help even if his aid is rejected.

Accessories: He has Round Glasses due to his Poor Eyesight.

Job: Hoofball Referee/Inventor

Skills: Secretly an Inventor and Scientist in Manehattan. He can design most things, but unexperienced in making siege weapons yet.

Side: After warned by Luna about her Sister's evil things, he joins the New Lunar Republic.

Arsenal: He has secretly designed a special Power Armor. It's plates has Obsidian Alloy, his Helmet had a nice visor for zooming in and out, and scanning targets. Though it is a prototype, all four hoof-parts are Rocket-Propelled to make it pack a kicks, and also helps with the Higher Jump and Galloping speed. The Side weapons he have pre-built are the Twin-Barrel Vulcans on both shoulder sides for range-purpose.

Experience: None in the War, but has developed a Power Armor.

2847991 In other words...he's Pony Iron Man? Neat! :moustache:

it says they go to the human world do they come back as ponies or do they stay human because I needs to know

2848038 They come back as ponies. No worries though, just think of something awesome for...your team...and fight back.

awesome because I needed to know that answer also do you have any good ideas for what my OC can be I mean its hard to decide ideas are being puked out like rainbows here

2848054 I'd prefer an OC that had retired, but came back. To be honest, my OC would go loud no matter what situation it is. It's okay to chose, all I know is that's it's going to be in the story. Just pick a team, and it's all good. :moustache:

2847958
Its not a negative comment, its actually quite a neutral statement. I'm simply observing that things got out of hand in around 9 seconds ^^
By the way your timing is really surprisingly accurate because I hit 20s and 29s when you indicated. Not on purpose. It just...hit then. Coincidence...XD Maybe.

As I said I'm rather new and haven't an OC to offer. Yet. I'll just follow this! Looking forward :)

2848112 No OC from you? Disappointing. :ajsleepy:

But I do approve that you liked my story. But...since theirs no OC from you, how about a human crossover they can go to? Maybe a video game, or a t.v show... :flutterrage: I DON'T CARE WHICH ONE YOU PICK!

Plus...have a moutstache. :moustache:

OC-Brass

Race-earth pony

Coat/texture-shaggy red autumn

mane/tail-shaggy dark blackish brown

cutie mark-Black tattered circle

Life/personality-after every full moon I wake up in a place completely mouth cover in blood and bodies everywhere pale as the moon I drained them I was born this way not knowing how to control myself around other ponies I wanted to ask the princess of the night why I was born like this but never got the chance with her sister around but know that they are in war ill be able to take this opportunity to answer my question

faction- isn't it obvious ^

weapon(s) of choices-swords blades anything slice and dice

armor-clothes big white t shirt with a black makeshift jacket

finally came up with my OC

2848190 In my head, he sounds a freaking Soilder murderer every full moon. That...or he's a werewolf from the twilight saga :ajbemused:

But me...doesn't matter as long as you can give me your OC. Heck, I don't even care if your OC was a car, I just seriously need it. But he does sound awesome :pinkiehappy::moustache:

eh was going for a vampire so ya have to give it a brooding mood to the back story why did it really sound a scale to1 to twilight dam I mustve been real detailed:derpyderp1:

i guess in order to make sound vampiric i should edit it but yea its usally a fact that during a full moon vampire power is increased

2848205 Hey...actually...maybe I can trust you to be my helper. You know, for upcoming ideas. Maybe you can help me out a bit when I am seriously busy. By the way...which crossover do you think your team should go to?

maybe a couple of rpg or we could crossover some bits from skyrim or bioshock or a good game that wouldn't erupt the core of equestria

i going to get off alright we will talk more later k

2848255 FUS RO DAH! :flutterrage:

And I love the Bioshock idea. But...Columbia...or Rapture?

2848171
We'll cross that bridge when we get there...I don't want you stuck with a me so early in the story, maybe when they hit the crossover point.

Suggestion v2.0 : Try the Teen Titans cartoon? Not the comics, there was a Warner Bros Cartoon featuring Robin, Cyborg, Starfire, Raven and Beast Boy...those were some legends in my childhood. Of course that could be left for the crossover ^^

I hate to sound insulting but you're going to write on a massive war, featuring multiple OCs and personalities you'll have to adhere to...you sure this isn't a bit...overdoing it? XD No doubt I'd love to see how its done, I just foresee a significant degree of difficulty.

EDIT : Played C&C3? Theres a Tiberium insane faction. Kane is some fanatic cult/terrorist leader and such...though I think its leaning to less-likely unless you want to drop everybody into an "already-in-War" earth. Too much 2 handle?

OC: Blazing Dawn

Gender: Male

Race: Pegasus

Cutie Mark: A black vortex with two katanas crossed over it.

Appearance: Crimson red coat, mane is fiery red with yellow stripes and normally falls back behind and to the sides of his head with his ears poking through, when flying his mane whips behind him and looks like a flame flowing behind him. His tail is basically the same as his mane. The "wrist" area of his hooves is covered in puffs of golden fur, his eyes are golden orange. Wings are crimson red like his hide, but have golden brown tips.

Personality: Loves to fight. Not the "I need to kill something!!" fights, but honorable, respectable, fun fights. He looks at fighting like a sport, the opponent should have just as much of a chance to prepare as him and whether or not the opponent is being respectful, he respects them. He doen't really apply this concept the other way though, if the opponent cheats or fights dirty he simply sees it as a challenge. He loves making friends, and while he doesn't share some ponie's veiws he tries his best to be considerate and understanding. He also is a bit of a geek, loving reading, video games, movies, the shibang. He also has a particular "crazy" kind of humor when around his friends, he acts extremely energetic and often not serious. When he starts fighting or isn't near his friends however, his attitude completely changes, he calms down and focus's, becoming a "strong and silent type".

Job: Is an assistant martial arts teacher of the School of Sword Arts in Las Pegasus, makes home-made weapons, both for decoration and battle as a secondary income. Considers "sportly streetfighter" his non-profit occupation.

Skills: Martial Arts, mostly Ryu-Ken-Ho style Ken-Jutsu (japanese sword style based around dual-wielding katana's for blocking-countering techniques), but also knows a variety of hoof-to-hoof arts as well. He also created his own branch of Ken-Jutsu style based around carrying his twin swords with his wings while flying at the same time, though he can quickly switch his swords to his hands in a flash if needed. A very good weapon blacksmith as well, he has crafted at least one copy of every type of sword ever used for war. A rather skilled flyer as well, being able to fight with swords gripped by his wing-tips while still pulling of impressive air manuevers. (Has been invited to join the wonderbolts academy, but turned down the offer.) He also has a strange ability he gained at the same time he got his cutie mark. Magic doesn't seem to directly effect him, this includes ALL magic helpful and harmful. Magic used on another object that would physically hurt would still hurt him, but magic that would effect his body or mind directly does nothing to him.

Side: Solar Empire, he decided to join the war for the oppurtunity to battle and make weapons (mostly battle). Had trouble choosing sides at first and eventually decided that Luna's love for video games was an inspiration, however he finally chose the Solar Empire because of the simple fact that, well it seemed like less ponies were siding with Celestia and he likes fighting the odds. Will probably try to change sides right before the war officially starts if the Lunar Republic looks too weak.

Favorite Weapon: Twin Katanas (Japanese Swords) of equal measurements that he crafted himself out of titanium alloy and had enchanted by an unknown source to be even more durable, capable of retaining their edge with little to no upkeep, and also can form flames along their blades at the will of Blazing Dawn(no matter where he is). One has the etching of a dragon while the other has a pheonix. Their scabbards are black with gold etchings of the sword's own symbols.

Armor: Usually wears none in a casual fight, but in a serious battle he wears leg gaurds and thin metal wing gaurds that don't limit his manueverability. When traveling he wears all his battle gear as well as a silver cloak with blue flames on the back.

Experience in War: War, none. Fighting and battle, a Huge amount. Could easily fight on equal grounds with extremely experienced war ponies. Only one problem: he doesn't kill unless he judges the pony he is fighting actually needed to die for the greater good of the lives of others. (Though he is espesially over-protective of his friends) He tends to push this feeling on others, which could limit his appeal to war generals who take death for granted.

I know I went a bit overboard here, but hey, I love fleshing out my OC's. If you want more info, then ask me!

In case ya guys didn't notice, my OC is very complicated :derpytongue2:
It's mostly because I developed him after myself, and not after any simple tv show character. If you find it too complicated to understand, you can tell me (I am not trying to insult your intelligence in any way, I just know that sometimes I can be a little hard to understand). :twilightsmile:

2848255 That Skyrim idea actually sounds pretty badass.
Imagine: a new order of Dragonborns! :pinkiegasp:

Comment posted by TheMasterSword deleted Jul 9th, 2013
Comment posted by TheMasterSword deleted Jul 9th, 2013

Alright. I choose the Lunar Republic, 'cuz Luna is best. My OC is on PonySquare, "Scarlet Sunrise."

If you can't find it letme know! :twilightblush:

2848333 What'ch you mean? This is considered a challenge for me. :ajsmug:

This is gonna be the hardest and challenging story I am going to do...but it's gonna be a lot of work...and fun. :derpytongue2:

The hard part for me is the battle. I can do OC's just fine...just the battle is gonna be hard. But...

CHALLENGE ACCPETED :flutterrage:

2848796 I...can't...find it :fluttercry:

:flutterrage: FFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU

Just send me the link :facehoof:

So, what do you think my OC, LikeaBaws? Should I add anything to it?

Name - Midnight Dream
Mane - Messy Black And Purple Mane
Coat- Dark Gray
Cm- White Crescent moon
Race- Earth
Eye Color- Red
Personality- Can be a bit rude at times, almost always looking for a fight. If you befriend her she can be really helpful in a situation and she will be nicer. She is good at fighting but isn't really that agile. and is really protective of her friends.
Skill- Defence
Side- Lunar

2848920 So...he's like Fluttershy...but a dude? AWESOME! Quite a challenge too. Your OC could be very useful...but when they meet a crossover...:pinkiecrazy:

Sounds awesome dude...just warning you, training starts soon Soilder. Your technician skills won't work in combat...BECAUSE YOUR GONNA GO TO WAR!! :flutterrage:

2848987 Going to need a bit more description, Paperwish21. Your description is fine...but what's her tactic? Her skills?

2848992 Hehe, don't worry, as he is basically me, I know that he will have full confidence and will be fueled by his ideas for the future of Equestria! :pinkiehappy:
(and I'm pretty sure that his inventions will help the effort)

2848796 Wait...I FOUND IT :pinkiehappy:

Okay, everything is awesome but for few things: Couldn't find the personality/Not enough information, so that you need to include.

Besides her freaking fire powers, anything else to include?

And...your engaged? :rainbowhuh: Interesting...:pinkiecrazy::trixieshiftright:

hey guys im back i was thinking on the bioshock idea and i thought a modified cloudsdale that's now called Columbia "modified" because know every race is able to walk in clo=i mean Columbia because the clouds are artificial ground

2849029 Um... Use this OC instead: http://ponysquare.com/VinylScratch2002/ :derpytongue2:

(PS: It's a roleplaying site. I'm not seriously "engaged"! :pinkiesick::rainbowwild:)

2849512 ...Are you seriously trying to troll me? First of all, the words are glowing light purple...so I'm not able to read it without straining my eyes. :applejackconfused: Second, I risked myself hurting them and...again...no important detail. Just music. :rainbowhuh:

Just make one that I can read...please? Or...at least you can return to your old OC and give me more information. All I need is information.

OK I ve made a lot of OC but I swear this is my final one:scootangel:

OC=Rip

Race-pegasus

Cutie mark- black stopwatch

Coat-pure black

Mane/Tail-dark Brown and wears a beanie with headphones

life/personality-they call me Rip for reasons I don't care I served in the navy of the royal guard but then I quite seeing to lets just say" not how I lay cards on the table". and trust me you wont find better thief ill tell you that much sure I get mercenary work but it doesn't compare to the band of misfit thieves I've been around I always carry my lucky switch blade. im a bit chubby do to the fact in las Pegasus I scored big and just went on a bit-spending spree trust me "NOT" to go in a frenzy often. And im a bit of a comedian

weapon use- Whip

Faction-leaning to the side of lunar republic

armor-white big t shirt and a medium duffle bag (to carry my "collection" of weapons)

2849698 Forget the whole thing then! You can just turn off CSS on my wall page anyways, gosh. I have no more freaking OC's so too bad now! :facehoof:

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