I don't usually read things over 9k. But damn, I love Sparity when it's Equestria Girls.
Bestiality is awesome.

Eh, it was pretty good, but ruined by the fact that Spike is still a little lap dog. How the hell could be properly fuck her doggy style? Unless his dick is freakishly big, the mechanics of it dot add up. If you had said he grew into a bigger dog, then it would work. But a dog the size of a Maltese banging a full-sized human from behind? Eh, nope.

Honestly, this is the first time i ever, in the history of me being here, have read a story with humand in it. It will be first and last because you executed it perfectly here. Beasitality can go so far.

I have the weirdest fucking boner right now.

The graduation proceeded without a hitch. The girls all sat together, and cooed over both Rarity's beautiful coiffure and perfect makeup, and Spike, who had been given a little tuxedo jacket, a top hat and, for extra cuteness, a mustache. The two shared a wink over what the manly accessory meant and why Rarity sat very gingerly. When her name was called Rarity had a particular gait, sashaying up to the podium completely nude under her robe, with dog semen slowly sliding along her thighs.

That was completely unexpected!!! Sparity, with a bit of bestiality? It actually works!!! Who would have known? And Rarity as the one that would go to graduation naked....NICE!!! A complete and plausible twist to the pony we know best as the Element of Generosity.

only tell him. only telling him.

Her slid. Her feet slid.

and pants. and pant.

fell form. fell from.

You are way too good at this.

Oh god that pacing.

The way that you switch between past and present, sex scenes and emotional pieces shatters the text into dozens of smaller parts that are each too short to really get into the story (or the sex).

Other than that: Original take on an old idea, a bit too much exposition, decent writing

Aside from the taste of powder there was a slight tang, vaguely metallic and somewhat musky

Salty milk and pennies?

9k?

'Tis but a number.

i guess this makes up for spike's treatment in Iron Will vs. The Penile Code

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I really liked the pacing, actually. It's like having 3 sex-scenes for the price of one.

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What if bestiality is between an equestria girls fluttershy and a pokemon, like in my story http://www.fimfiction.net/story/136459/congratulations-your-friendship-evolved-into-love

I can just imagine Spike when he goes through the portal.
"hey guys I'm back, it's great to see you all again. Well I'm going to live in the other world now. See ya."
I thought the end was a bit 'Ew', but funny.
2854379 Sorry, I can't help this,
IT'S OVER NINE THOUSAND!!!!!

Great story! Thumbs up!

it would seem you shall be here until graduation time.

Admittedly, EqG wasn't terribly clear on the timeline, but it seemed to imply that the Mane 6 were seniors at the time.

Holy shit! Foot jobs.
They're a rarity and I haven't read about one in a few months.

The foot play was wonderful and cute and with a little bit of tickling to boot.

I like the details of how Spike's dewclaws coming into play.

Hmm... about knotting. I remember reading on a forum a while ago a woman saying she was interested in getting beastial with her dog but was afraid of the whole knotting process. Someone posted that they wouldn't get knotted cause in a dog's vagina there's something that specifically clamps on the knot and holds them together. There's nothing like that in a human that would cause that to happen. Or something like that? I dunno. I'm no anatomy expert.

3328068 what is the password for your story?

Damn hot dog sex....

*fap fap fap*

4569273 hell yeah

2854379 that coment made my night... thanks
and for you dear author... thanks, i have many feels now... and tears of joy leak onto my keyboard

Rule 34....NOW.