Pony Flash P.O.V
I decided to go to sleep. I heard a scream, and I headed down to the sound. It was Twilight! And me? Kissing? I felt heartbroken. Then I realized.
I must be dreaming.
I shook my head and headed back to my room to sleep in my dream.
"Good-night, crazy me."
Princess Twilight's P.O.V
"Flash! You're here!"
I was so happy!
I kissed him again.
"I love you, Flash! I missed you!"
I really wanted to lose my virginity, but I didn't want to do that right now.
Human/Pony Flash P.O.V
She told she loved me.
I was overjoyed.
"Twilight, I heard you say good-bye to me. Why?"
Twilight looked shocked and told me not to worry about it.
I kissed her again.
"I love you too, Twilight."
She smiled at me.
"That's why you should come to my world! We'll graduate high school! Get married! Have children! It will be so wonderful!"
Twilight had an excited gleam in her eyes, but it soon died.
"I cant"
I couldn't believe my new ears. She declined.
"Why?"
Twilight looked at me sad, and told me her responsibility here in "Equestria."
I realized it was either she lose her princess hood and pony life, or come with me and marry me and live together.
I had to stay in the pony world. For her.
... This was VERY rushed. not really a good chapter, sorry. I don't think I can read anymore. The thing this story lacks is character development. I mean, sure, Twi was attracted to Flash, but to have the romance escalate so quickly? to the point that Twi wanted to lose her virginity right there? Nah...
3590411 agreed. Oh but it is still good I wonder what happens in the last chapter...