Pony Terrestrial

by Arcanel

Announcement. Boring, yet important

So…I’m back! Well, something like that, even though I HAVE finished my exams for now. CPM here. Do not worry, for those who care for this story. This is not an announcement saying I’m quitting, I’m going on a long hiatus, etc. No. This is me saying that the story will be going through some heavy editing. Why? Because a) I’ve been re-seeing my chapters, and I’ve seen some HORRIBLE errors and omissions I’ve made. I need to make them perish! And b)…I’ll be now going on my first try to get on Equestria Daily. As far-fetched as that may seem, I am still trying, just to see if EQD is interested in my story, and just how good I can be of a writer. If I can get in, YES! If not, then that’s not a problem. I’m not going to go in a depression state or something like that. After all, EQD doesn’t define me. You, my dear readers, do. That still doesn’t make me go in wonder whether I can get in or not XD. Also, you deserve the best I can put for you. And since this will be in Fimfiction, and Fanfiction as it always has been, why SHOULDN’T I try to do my best? So, once again, heavy editing is ongoing. There will be especial changes in chapters 5 and 7, as the descriptions in those chapters NEED to be changed, NOW. This will probably mean that I won’t be posting any new chapters in the “right now” moment. However, I DO promise to bring a new chapter in this week. I’ve been hella trying to get the next chapter out, and I was planning to get one out this weekend. Alas, many times I wanted to write, BOOM. I had to go elsewhere, as irritating as that is. The next chapter will also be important because I need to measure the characters’ reactions with what I’m going to show, in brony related stuff, be it music, fics, animations, PMV’s, or whatever else. I have already chosen one video that is a perfect way to introduce them to what we have created in a way, as well as introduce them, slightly but better to try and handle, to the somewhat dark, random side of the community. And THAT will require a total care for my part, because that can go awfully wrong, and that’s the last thing I need. Since truth is a lot of the base for the ponies and dragon’s trust in Arcanel, he needs to tell this. Like someone said, “You can’t keep them away from the dark side forever”. This, of course, means that Arcanel will think it better to show them in a controlled area, instead of something else. Therefore, thought must be put in the next chapter from my part, so as to not screw anything, and go OOC with someone, or not realistic. Whatever happens next, I hope you’ll enjoy it. Wish me luck on me entering EQD, which I’ll try to edit all the story by the end of this week or something like that, and I hope that what is edited, and how the chapters end later, will be even better for you to read. The style will of course be the same (in this arc at least), but there is a lot of grammar, omissions, and even spell checking that needs to be done. As well as maybe some other stuff. I also need to ask you something. Do you think the things I put in between brackets that are like my thoughts so as to break the mood are good and fun, or should I put them away?

Okay, I think that was all I needed to say. Wish me luck, and I’ll see you somewhere in this week! CPM out.

Comments

[The Wake]

Good luck, dude! Hope ya make it to EQD!

Here, have a moustache to bring you good luck

[Arcanel]

731053 I thank you, and of course, here, take this one for you since you're so great

[Arcanel]

731564...hmmm...I honestly don't know exactly WHAT to consider as slice of life to tell the truth. I mean, I was somewhat sure, but since I prefered to be 100% sure, i didn't add it. Do you think it has the correct tags so far? And do you think I SHOULD include Slice of Life tag?

[Arcanel]

731676 Well...it's kind of difficult to tell. This is pretty much going to be the last thing that will happen in the house of Arcanel. And I do mean the last thing. Whether going out side and having some...interesting things happening outside, COULD remove it from the Slice of Life tag, but I'm not sure. Plus, this is somewhat the only arc that works this way. After all, my intention for the other 8 groups is that it will differ greatly. There will be chase scenes, fight scenes, total fan scenes, and a WHOLE lot more of stuff. What do you think?

[Arcanel]

731710 Ok then, thanks. Also, expect shiny things in 3 chapters

[Arcanel]

Believe me. You'll see what the hell I'm talking about...and hopefully, you won't see it coming .731761

[Arcanel]

743428 Nope, I just changed it a few days ago. I felt that my description needed to be a little bit more...complete/better/professional/something like that, than what was before. I'm actually glad you noticed . What do you think?

[Arcanel]

745159 Hehe...yes, yes, yes and and with those three, also expect...around 23 characters more, which, along with the ones in Arcanel's house, sums up more than 30 characters PLUS three more human OC's that will be "asigned" with three different groups so...yeah, there will be a LOT of characters. In fact here's how the general thing goes: 9 places around the world in which there will be groups of, counting Arcanel's group and other human OC's, 10, 4, 4, 3, 3, 4, 4, 4, 3 characters. Is that good enough to a non-spoling aproximated of what the hell will happen on my story?

[Arcanel]

I'm just gonna assume that is a "we have a WINNER!" ring-esque. Anyway, I think if I tell you NOT to think too much just what the hell will I do, you won't do me any case right? It will be quite the long while until ALL the groups have been properly introduced. And the best part is, that each arc (that is the story of each group) is divided in parts. That is, no story will be complete at first I'm gonna cliffhanger into OBLIVION!745229

[Arcanel]

Umm...what's the eta? I really never heard the term before. As for when it goes into the next arc...I can't tell you taht, that's spoiling!You'll just have to wait and see. It's close however. And what do you mean by updating on what the other ponies were doing?745263

[Arcanel]

745340 Huh...thanks for the imformation. Anyway, given the current situation I would say that between Sunday and Monday. I'm gonna try doing it BEFORE that, but I'm not that hopeful. And as for the other, yes. Each arc will be interrupted so that in theory, the timeline of all arcs are going at the same time. Of course, tweaking a little the time, especially because of the difference of hours between countries, is a bit unavoidable. I'll try to do it well, but I in some places it won't make that much sense. Which is why i warned this before: "I'm TRYING to make it as realistic as I can", AKA, I cannot always be logical for the sake of story. And as for the example...well, let's just say that it's not THAT far away from you're thinking in a way. Also, you're correct. All other OC's will have different personalities, and different knowledge of MLP: FIM. I can't make someone hate the ponies. At least not in this fic. And as for the OMEGA reunion...I honestly don't know if I'll be able to pull that one off. But I think I can manage. Anything else?

[Arcanel]

745400 Huh...It's 2:50AM here so...I'm not caring about the sleeping part. Anyway, you go to sleep. Besides, questions are better formed when well rested. Good night and of course don't forget you can ask me anytime!

[Arcanel]

775798 With NMM it's NOT going to happen...with Trixie however...I think I can arrange something similar because I somewhat had that in mind (although less "cute wibbly bunny" and more fanrage mode) Also, it was very weird to see the Looney Tunes in English XD. All I can say is, since you like Trixie a lot I'll tell you this much, will be in a place where spectacles ARE appreciate, she will be with NOT too much appreciated chraracters...and maybe something else

[Arcanel]

776495 Who doesn't!? Still like I said. If by any chance I can impress you or the rest with what will happen in the rest of the groups, then mission accomplished. IF, even more emphasis on the word if, IF you want to know about Trixie's group, then I am willing to tell you all I have from it (well, except the plot that is I can't spoiler that much ya know?

[Arcanel]

776679 You know...I don't think I ever defined that... Now I feel the need to thank you somehow for making me realize that little detail I missed. Thanks I'll get you back on that detail in some other time when I carefully think it out.

[Arcanel]

776742 Ugh, don't remind me of ALL the songs I could have, should have, would have put. I would have used more if a) getting all the songs and choosing the correct ones is NOT easy, b) I can't remember every goddamn song and c)...just outright phew. Nonetheless, there are many songs that I could have used ( I dared not to use Pink Floyd, I dared not to use Stevie Ray Vaughan, I dared not to use some badass songtracks of games, movies, etc...hell awaits me with a reserved seat I may not have used them because at the time I couldn't remember, but nonetheless)