Oh my gosh, I am loving this idea of stories so far! This is fantastic!

That ending is hillarious! Dash's line... just a total win.

I look forward to this being continued. Oh so much...

I like that Dash got thrown out of the team, now while that might sound odd I like it because she got chucked out defending Fluttershy. The bully's comment immedaly made me think that the two must have some history together at a more...personal... level.
Then even better, It led to her going to Fluttershy's. The overdramatic pet, followed by warm fuzzies was sweet.
Then I couldn't help but laugh at how Fluttershy stopped cooking. I take it they are going to have a far more appealing 'meal' now.

Congratz, your story has put me in the best mood Ive been in all week. I think I might have trouble stoping my self from grinning.

Now I wonder... how will you cover the bedroom scene...?

Lovely, as always :)
(Even if I did go into it confused. I was reading another story (Article 2, not that it matters), closed a youtube tab and suddenly ended up in this tab instead XD. Took me a paragraf or two to realise that story hadn't just randomly gone humanized and flutterdash).
Anyways, keep up the good work. Always a pleasure to read :)

2729670 I'm glad to hear this brightened your mood! Flutterdash seems to do that, doesn't it?

My apologies, though... I am not a fan of writing out love scenes. After writing two or three, pretty much all the originality you could possibly put into sex is exhausted... It just gets boring to write. This part of the story ends there, the next chapter will pick up at a different point in their lives. That's why it's sort of like a oneshot. Still, I hope you stick around.

(Also, the 'meal' comment made me lol.)

2729698 Thanks!
... Though now I wish things in my life spontaneously turned into Flutterdash...

2729720 I'll stick around for Flutterdash, especially from you. and Im still very keen to see where this goes.
Oh and I do like how you skirt the really kinky stuff... gives me ideas on how to do it on my mature Flutterdash epic Im writing

IT'S SO FLUFFY!!!!!

Damn you and your humanized ponies! Why do you have to write so well! ;-)

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*Quietly contemplates finding out where you live, hiring an artist to draw some Flutterdash and get someone to duct tape the picture to your window during the night, so the first thing you see when you look outside is Flutterdash*

...sigh, unfortunately, that would be both creepy and quite expensive, but meh, I can dream.

I like where this is going content wise. Great start, and anticipating whatever's next.

2731217 Oh god, that reminds me...I got a Justin Bieber cutout thing for my little sister's birthday last year. I left it in front of her door, and... turns out, a guy looming over you outside your bedroom is actually really scary. She screamed and fell over

Moral of the story is... leaving life like gifts outside people's doors or windows rarely has the desired effect

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I want to make love to you. Your name, your stories, your style of writing...

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i lel'd

Im really hoping this gets a update soon as its just sooo awesome!

2779400 It's next, actually I finished the next bit, but decided to re-do some of it, which is what I'm doing now.

2779410 Ok, now you've got me excited

"It's so fluffy, I'm gonna die!"

That made my day.

Sooo........wheres that update?

Hello, I am just wondering when the update is going to come......