Equestria is teetering on the brink of war. Twilight Sparkle is sent in to try and salvage the situation. Along the way she meets an old friend, and together they try and save what they had as the world around them burns.
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fucking celestia, sticking her big immortal nose where it doesn't belong!
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Oh don't you worry about that
I'm doing my set dressing right now, but things will start exploding in the very near future.
This chapter, while good, doesn't really belong by itself. I would have rather it be folded into the previous one or have integrated its developments into the the plot of the next chapter.
Good attention to detail. You really listened to my points about firearms and weapons handling.