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Not really a fan of the Gentlemenverse.
The main problem of this fic is :
WALL OF TEXT !
You should really space it more, it's really tiring to read it.
Really really liked it....
The clashes, the misconceptions, it all works really well together.
The only suspension of belief for me was how welcoming he was to her and then say to his buddy how horrible it was and desired her to leave... I see him two-faced, if that makes any sense...
I dont mind the wall of text, it flows so well for me that I didnt even notice it.
Hope to see more! I love the Gentlemenverse... Just an interesting concept.
Well, keep up the great work!
This is fantastic! Just needs a little proofing, and maybe paragraph the chapters? This is awesome; at first I didn't know what was going on but then it 'clicked', aah, it's jumping back and forth. Awesome.
I like where this story is going, oh the drama and the...racism. Fuck those ponies, really!
Also Verde is the best pony.
I found this to be quite enjoyable.
I was unsure about this at first but the description sounded interesting. read threw it and i think its actually really good. just odd flowing with time jumping back and forth.
By Discords beard, the time line jumping is making me nauseous. That and a few spelling and grammar errors.
Over all interesting story arc, I'm gonna keep an eye on you.
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ME TOO! ME TOO! PICK ME!!
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ME TOO! ME TOO! PICK ME!!
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ME TOO! ME TOO! PICK ME!!