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It feels so weird reading this story with each chapter being near 50-40 days apart, jumping back and forth. Still I enjoy it.
I like how you portrayed their home town as being full of racist assholes. It makes this more interesting.
That said, your early chapters are in desperate need of an editor with plenty of mispelled words among other errors. However your latest chapters seem to be improving on that front.