That still doesn’t explain why she kissed you and was so… giggly. Just as you open your mouth to ask, her horn glows with magic and sends your shirt back over your head the wrong way.
3487755 3487147 I think he's the only named Lunar Guard in the show. As such, I made him the captain of the Lunar Guard. No relation to any other characters from other stories.
Warning: this story is suffering from a 75% lack of corgi's, it is recommended that you inject at least 5 corgi's into each chapter for maximum tucking and fypos. Do not question The House of Corgi's Mr.Fugger, or you will be punished for your heresy.
Good chapter by the way, I won't tell you how or why until my corgi demand is met. TIME REMAINING: 500 CORGI SECONDS
Bad news: I have a skank stamp on my neck, only instead of marking me as owned, it's marked me as an ideal target for super-strong, super-horny vampire ponies. Nice.
Once again, the dick-in-the-box has failed to disappoint.
I'm kinda sorry for saying this but when you talked about bloodthirsty medic I thought of my self because I just beat wave 666 on mom as a medic and got the last kill against a heavy with my oversaw so right now I am laughing my ads off. LOLOLOLOL!!!!!
We need this story to be continued! Oh author gods, return him to us so we may be blessed by words. Honestly, good stuff you got here, it's an interesting setting and I really want more.
3992939 I'm still writing this, it's just taking time. I need to put work before writing, unfortunately. If I could sit around and write all day, I would.
tucking fypos.... I found a new way to call people fucking psychos
3486171 Not first post. Look.
3486101 Dammit, I read that wrong the first time.
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I wonder what could that be...
oh yeah! I was really hoping to see more of this!
now...If I could just have another chapter
awesome chapter! cant wait for the next!
this chapter is a bit meh :/
Does your Captain Smiles have any relation to Smiles in the fic "Diares of a Madman"? Both are Lunar guards, and have the same name.
I hope we get to see more of Bright Light again in later chapters.
who is smiles again
its been so long since the last update i can't remember anything!
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3487147
I think he's the only named Lunar Guard in the show. As such, I made him the captain of the Lunar Guard. No relation to any other characters from other stories.
3488728 why is he called a monster?
3489071
You'll see...
Smiles? That just sounds creepy!
Also your story needs a person/pony called Joel,
No I don't know why.
Awesome cant till the next chapter
also, Fugger your profile pic, were did it come from?
you did a good job with this fanfic but it would be better if it had more chapters wink wink
Behold! TYPO!
Warning: this story is suffering from a 75% lack of corgi's, it is recommended that you inject at least 5 corgi's into each chapter for maximum tucking and fypos. Do not question The House of Corgi's Mr.Fugger, or you will be punished for your heresy.
Good chapter by the way, I won't tell you how or why until my corgi demand is met.
TIME REMAINING: 500 CORGI SECONDS
3490645
Wow, I really forgot that. No more writing late at night.
Thanks a ton for catching that!
3489081 OK!
but please don't let the next update take a month
i forget important parts of the story if it does
3490551 YES my thoughts exactly!
Cute yet leathal, that's the best way to describe bat ponys.
Good news: Not getting raped!
Bad news: I have a skank stamp on my neck, only instead of marking me as owned, it's marked me as an ideal target for super-strong, super-horny vampire ponies. Nice.
Once again, the dick-in-the-box has failed to disappoint.
Y'know, it's really not cool how I can only like this story once
3497420 I agree with this statement
I'm kinda sorry for saying this but when you talked about bloodthirsty medic I thought of my self because I just beat wave 666 on mom as a medic and got the last kill against a heavy with my oversaw so right now I am laughing my ads off. LOLOLOLOL!!!!!
This is you:
I wrote them bronies a sexy nurse attack.
Bronies love sexy nurse attacks.
Thanks for the new chapter!
It was well worth the wait.
really good keep writing!
great story man please continue
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To Anonymous:
With every vampony, bat-pony, whatever you call them are starting to look at you as prey means you should...
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This story still alive?
http://mylittlefacewhen.com/f/10401/
3491004 when will there be more?
3619089
Dunno, but I'll get started on a new one soon.
Is this story getting a update soon? It's really good
I forget, can bat-ponies die of a gunshot wound?
this is a very good story so far and i can't wait to read more.
Nav read this story for me while we were driving home from Bronycon... I never knew it was on Fimfiction. I'm a sucker for batpones, so keep it going.
We need this story to be continued! Oh author gods, return him to us so we may be blessed by words. Honestly, good stuff you got here, it's an interesting setting and I really want more.
continue the story
why the story stopped ?
It would be cool if we knew you stoped the story (would not be cool at all) or if the next chapter is taking a while.
I just really like this story and it would suck if you stoped the chapters.
3992939
I'm still writing this, it's just taking time. I need to put work before writing, unfortunately. If I could sit around and write all day, I would.
3993492 Hey, im just glad you didn't drop the story. The longer it takes, the better the chapter is .
Btw, keep up the good work.
More bat pony stuff is always awesome. Also, nice choice for art, equestria-prevails draws the best bat ponies in my opinion.
Loved it!
Now this is my favorite fic. i hope you continue it sometime soon, even if it takes a while i'll be patient.
We need moar sexy vamponies!!!
Keep going with the story