Fluttershy has a little secret keeping it from her special somepony, or should I say special somebody.
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Hmm
it seems that Winter is having the time of his life. Keep up the grate work!
My, my its looks like some mares like a little rough, something tell me, in future chapters Winter will take a leap of fate and give a "personal" gift to her.
Ah leash and a dog collar with the name of her on a plaque. I only saying something tells me that is just a matter of time before Shy will start asking him if she can call him master.
Oh I will also like to see Luna asking to be punished,
Great job I can't wait to see what will come up next
You should definitely research how feminine arousal, climax, and afterglow works, because as alien as it may seem to hear/read this, females are wired differently than males. Sex as a female is completely different than sex as a male and I feel that you do the female behavior and activity during arousal, climax, and the aftermath severe injustice by shoehorning them into behaving as a man would during the arousal, climax, and afterglow stages. I would strongly encourage consulting with a sexually experienced female editor or proofreader, or at least a female, in addition to performing the research of sex as experienced by females should you ever come back to correct this oversight, or for your future endeavors in writing NC-17 erotica. So while I enjoyed the story enough to revisit it, this is something that really stands out to me as I read through the chapters. I'm commenting on this because I really would like to see you improve as a writer.
Peace,
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