Another interesting chapter although we're still in the process of developing the story at this stage.
Kanjar is a villain but is only a fairly narrow-spectrum and very specific threat. His issues are all about his home system and his political ambitions. The fact he's an aggressive dictator puts him on the Guardians' radar but he's hardly a top division foe. I suspect that he's hoping to recruit Glida as a mercenary for his own objectives. That's seriously misunderstanding the nature of the Sinestro Corps and he might find himself on the wrong end of a Yellow Power Ring and learning that fear is also a tool of order.
I'm worried about Twilight; if Mac is under the influence of a Red Power Ring, he might hurt her in a moment of uncontrolled rage or passion during an intimate moment.
Meanwhile, Twilight seems to be intent on adding a lot of griffin magic Bat-gadgets to what I presume is Mare-do-Well's arsenal.
2702017 Okay, so far we have: Green Lantern - Applejack Mare-do-Well - Twilight Sparkle
Rainbow Dash will probably adopt a super-persona too. Things are heading quickly in the direction of the birth of the Justice Herd Equestria, IMHO.
*shudders* I just visualised a Black Lantern Granny Smith
Not sure if you've been asked this before,but: Since the Red Lanterns will be the villains(after seeing the title and cover art),will they be based on the cartoon or the comics? Considering I did have...some problems with them removing all moral ambiguity from them(okay,two or three of tem)and rage kitty,but I digress. Either way:It's entertaining ,so you can have my like and I do hope this gets finished.
So it seems twilight is working on her Super Persona. Cant wait to see her debut for that. But i can see it taking awhile. Until she has everything worked out or something big happens that needs her. Also love how things are evolving with Dash and AJ. I hope nothing comes in between them and tries to stop it either on purpose or accident.
Very nice. At first I thought Twilight was going to end up as a Star Sapphire fighting to save Big Mac from his Red ring, but then you did the bits with the bat gadgets (or is that Mare gadgets, since she'll probably be mare do well instead of bat mare).
I still think Twilight would make a better Ted Kord (2nd Blue Beetle) type character than Bruce Wayne. Of course to really make it work you'd need a Booster Gold character for the Goofy Buddy movie vibe you get from the two.
Not only a Twilight/Mac ship but a (mostly) confirm on that AppleDash hinted on before. And a new player joins the story, named Kanjar Ro? I know very little about this guy. I was about to look him up but halted. I'll wait to be surprised when he makes shit hits the fan. Don't wanna ruin what he may (or not) do.
Hmm... I'm liking most of this story so far, but I'm not sure if Twilight is a 'Batmare' type - what with her magic and all, the use of gadgets seems kind of redundant (and more Pinkie-esque, really) - I think I'd put her more on par with characters like Doctor Fate or Zatanna.
That said! I am looking forward to future installments! :D You've got me hooked to your story!
Applejack-Green Lantern Gilda-Yellow Lantern Twilight-Batman-esqe(eventually, my also be Star Saphire) Big Mac-Red Lantern(unconfirmed, but possible) Pinkie Pie-Blue Lantern(unconfirmed, but strongly hinted at in the previous story)
Not now. There would be a time and a place, but it wasn’t now. AJ wasn’t one to jump into things without thinking, and doing it here would be asking for the big hurt. As Applejack focused on the sunset in front of her, however, a thought crossed her mind.
That’s right. It’s usually RD who acts before she thinks.
Another interesting chapter although we're still in the process of developing the story at this stage.
Kanjar is a villain but is only a fairly narrow-spectrum and very specific threat. His issues are all about his home system and his political ambitions. The fact he's an aggressive dictator puts him on the Guardians' radar but he's hardly a top division foe. I suspect that he's hoping to recruit Glida as a mercenary for his own objectives. That's seriously misunderstanding the nature of the Sinestro Corps and he might find himself on the wrong end of a Yellow Power Ring and learning that fear is also a tool of order.
I'm worried about Twilight; if Mac is under the influence of a Red Power Ring, he might hurt her in a moment of uncontrolled rage or passion during an intimate moment.
Meanwhile, Twilight seems to be intent on adding a lot of griffin magic Bat-gadgets to what I presume is Mare-do-Well's arsenal.
2702017
Okay, so far we have:
Green Lantern - Applejack
Mare-do-Well - Twilight Sparkle
Rainbow Dash will probably adopt a super-persona too. Things are heading quickly in the direction of the birth of the Justice Herd Equestria, IMHO.
*shudders* I just visualised a Black Lantern Granny Smith
Not sure if you've been asked this before,but:
Since the Red Lanterns will be the villains(after seeing the title and cover art),will they be based on the cartoon or the comics?
Considering I did have...some problems with them removing all moral ambiguity from them(okay,two or three of tem)and rage kitty,but I digress.
Either way:It's entertaining ,so you can have my like and I do hope this gets finished.
So it seems twilight is working on her Super Persona. Cant wait to see her debut for that. But i can see it taking awhile. Until she has everything worked out or something big happens that needs her.
Also love how things are evolving with Dash and AJ. I hope nothing comes in between them and tries to stop it either on purpose or accident.
Very nice. At first I thought Twilight was going to end up as a Star Sapphire fighting to save Big Mac from his Red ring, but then you did the bits with the bat gadgets (or is that Mare gadgets, since she'll probably be mare do well instead of bat mare).
I wonder what are your plans for Twilight in this tale...is she going to be come something of a Batmare of this story ?
Also, I wonder how Big Mac is going to keep his relationship with Tiwlight and his "Big red" secret away from his girlfriend and his family ?
All together it was some update and ai cannot wait to see more coming of it.
Things got interesting rather quickly.
On 3 fronts no less.
I want the Mane 6 to join the Justice League.
And here I thought the Red Lantern was going to be Opalescence.
Seriously, though, Twilight's a good pick for Equestria!Batman.
I still think Twilight would make a better Ted Kord (2nd Blue Beetle) type character than Bruce Wayne. Of course to really make it work you'd need a Booster Gold character for the Goofy Buddy movie vibe you get from the two.
Maybe after this is all said and done Applejack could go to Earth.
I wanna see how she reacts to the Justice League.(Really just Superman and Batman)
Not only a Twilight/Mac ship but a (mostly) confirm on that AppleDash hinted on before. And a new player joins the story, named Kanjar Ro? I know very little about this guy. I was about to look him up but halted. I'll wait to be surprised when he makes shit hits the fan. Don't wanna ruin what he may (or not) do.
When comes next chapter
Hmm... I'm liking most of this story so far, but I'm not sure if Twilight is a 'Batmare' type - what with her magic and all, the use of gadgets seems kind of redundant (and more Pinkie-esque, really) - I think I'd put her more on par with characters like Doctor Fate or Zatanna.
That said! I am looking forward to future installments! :D You've got me hooked to your story!
You know I was kind of thinking of the key as like the sequencer from the arkham series. did anybody else think that.
So Twilight is preparing a Batmare style arsenal of gadgets, nice.
So, here's where things stand:
Applejack-Green Lantern
Gilda-Yellow Lantern
Twilight-Batman-esqe(eventually, my also be Star Saphire)
Big Mac-Red Lantern(unconfirmed, but possible)
Pinkie Pie-Blue Lantern(unconfirmed, but strongly hinted at in the previous story)
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I agree for the most part, but due to the tag, I think we may see a Rainbow Dash red lantern. It just seems to fit a bit more.
Also, if it's dead, just say so. It hasn't been updated in almost 5 years!
Twilight’s bat-mare, does that mean spike will be robin
That’s right. It’s usually RD who acts before she thinks.