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GOW reference.
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And the fact that it's spelt "cries" maybe?
This story is good overall but it does seem rushed, after reading the other two chapters I wouldn't expect her to stop the virus' effects by the third chapter.
I was also expecting the Mane Six to have a more important role rather than have her free herself.
(This was a pain in the flank to write on my cellphone.)
I will be honest. I love this story :D. But your spelling is horrific lol. So plz try to get it proof red before you post it
Very nice chapter :3
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I facepalmed when I saw the name.
OK the problem with the prologue has now been sorted out now and I will get TheGrooveDuke to read through and edit before up loading.
also there will be explanations in the next chapter.
Slow down please... There were like.. 20 spelling/grammar mistakes in chapter 3.. and more in 2.
At least proof read your story before posing it.
In left 4 dead witches were always an enigma to me.
I'm going to take longer to upload the next few chapters, I'm working on correcting the grammar issues but they should be up over the next week
Sorry it's taking so long, i'm still waiting for chapter 3 to be grammar checked.
Also I am looking for additional readers and grammar checkers, if your intrested please contact me.
Am I the only one who thinks Maria is the bad guy here? She murdered the witch without hesitation, while the witch(a sapient being) was just following her instincts at first, and then tried to escape the ponies who were trying to 'cure'-read: replace-her. I can't read this story, I thought it would be about the witch being redeemed, not just killed and replaced.
The main idea of this story is of having a Witch in Equestria and yet you kill her in chapter 2,wtf is the damn point of reading this?