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nice stargate reference
Better grammar!
lets see; Very very nice premise, pretty good execution, not bad grammar, Stargate references. The only problem I have with this fic is there is not enough of it.
Well, this is still drawing me in that's for sure. I believe its going to be quite a deep delve into Witch's emotions once the cure begins.... not going to be easy to reconcile cannibalism.
It's official, I hate spell check
Various grammar errors and remember to separate character dialogue and action Not bad but could use work and dat reference
Good chapter.
Wait. So Stargate (awesome) and a zombie game?
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Yep, I might one day come back and do a full rewrite of this, looking back on this and I have no idea where the plot went...
Are you fucking insane? That's like saying you need to know how to cast a meteor spell before you learn a fireball.