So the Mass Effect: Legendary Edition released today and I've been having a blast replaying through ME 1. These are game I haven't been able to play in over 7 years. Going to a Wiki to research information on ME is fine, but experiencing the game is so much better.

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So chapter 9 and 10 were the two I dreaded the most. After reading them again I realized that having Shepard, AJ, and Dash fight, the way I did, was rather out of character; especially for the latter two. So I removed the fight and added a new story plot point that I think will be a lot more fun to play with in the future. So anyway with 9 and 10 being combined into a singular chapter this brings me to the end of the revisions and new chapters will be coming up soon.

Chapter 8 has been renamed and the update posted. Only two more chapters to go.

Changed include some revelations and lot of dialogue changes, please tell me how you feel about it.

So Chapter 7 has finally been updated, only three more to go, and I'm making good progress. While I had announced that I'd hoped to have a new chapter up by the second week of April, sadly, that does not seem to be possible.

I'm not going to make excuses, nor can I discuss what has happened, but let's just say certain issues have demanded more of my attention than I'd anticipated. Thus, why my progress has been slowed.
Rest assured that a new chapter is coming.

I'm wondering, is there is anyone willing to contribute artwork to ME:C? Of course I'm not expecting you to work for free. If you, or someone you know, is willing then please DM me or you can reach my email at oceansama@gmail.com or Discord at username Oceansama#6016

We can discuss details there.

Chapter 6 'Broken' has been updated and thus I have officially caught up to the revisions I made over five years previous. This time, however, I am back better than ever.

It did get me to wonder how my story got as popular as it did, when every chapter I rewrite is super full of cringe. Seriously, what was it about ME:C that drew you all in? If someone else had posted a story like mine, all those years ago, I would have made a hard pass and swiped left.

Chapter 5 has been renamed 'The Shepard' and the update is posted. Overall the chapter became shorter by about 1.1K words. I had to trim a lot of the fat off of it and rewrite quite a bit to make it more consistent both in tone and flow (I.e. less needless exposition).

The new version of chapter 4 is up and I changed the name from 'Post Traumatic' to 'Waking Nightmare' as I think its more fitting.

I don't know if these frequent posts will become tiresome, but I feel its necessary to keep you informed of my progress and prove that I'm not going to disappear again.

With that said, ME:C - Chapter 3. Medical Supplies has been updated.

As the title says, Chapter Two: Priority Appleloosa, has now been revised and the update posted.

By now some of you may have noticed that I made a small update to "Mass Effect: Continuum" making a new prologue to separate it from the first chapter and editing both to fix various mistakes and improve story flow. I plan on re-editing the rest of the story as well and will be continuing with new chapters as I have grown unsatisfied with my previous work and to help familiarize myself with the plot since I lost my previous story notes.

When will a new chapter come?

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I have finished editing ME:C's latest chapter. A second read may be necessary as it is over 1K words longer and some details have changed. Such as the end of the chapter. You don't have to, but I thought I should mention it. https://www.fimfiction.net/story/24174/10/mass-effect-continuum/back-and-forth-updated-5-23-17

Anyway, onto the next chapter.

Ok, I've been working on fixing up the latest chapter (Back and Forth) I can't believe I posted what I did in the state it currently is. I do want to give a thank you to everyone who left a comment and didn't chew me out for the mess I gave you. Since you all have been waiting for an update for so long.

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Sorry it took so long, but the second chapter to Mass Effect: Continuum has been edited and revised. No major story revisions so you don't have to re-read the chapter. Still I'd like to hear your thoughts on what has changed.

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Sorry it took so long to revise the first chapter. When reading it I became aware of how flowery and pretentious my writing was. I've tried to fix some of that with this latest update. There are no plot changes, but a lot of of editing was done to make the chapter better. Feel free to read it again and comment so that I might further improve my skill.