ME:C Chapter one updated. · 8:05pm Sep 10th, 2015
Sorry it took so long to revise the first chapter. When reading it I became aware of how flowery and pretentious my writing was. I've tried to fix some of that with this latest update. There are no plot changes, but a lot of of editing was done to make the chapter better. Feel free to read it again and comment so that I might further improve my skill.
This fic isn't dead after all?
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Time for a happy dance.
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We all thought you are ded
NICE