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Apr
11th
2022

The Elder Brother - A final Goodbye · 10:52pm Apr 11th, 2022

Hello friends, I bet you never expected this post, did ya. Yeah, I should have done it a long time ago but now I officially pull the plug on this, and all my incomplete stories. I had moved on, and no longer write in any capacity, so I figured it would be cruel of me to hang onto this false pretense that I might come back, it ain't happening.

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Dec
29th
2019

The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 3 · 2:18am Dec 29th, 2019

So I finished going over a few more chapters and created an organized document with bullet points about how the future of the story will shape up, so I won't do stuff on a whim with no rime or reason anymore. Also after finishing the seventh season of MLP and briefly going through the chronological order of the world's history, I can safely say that there is no way, no how I would be able to tie The Elder Brother to the show without braking major plot points, so yeah. I might play around here

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Dec
22nd
2019

The Elder Brother: reincarnated - part 2 · 7:51pm Dec 22nd, 2019

Hello guys and gals, just wanted to give you a bit of a progress update. I've redone the prologue and the second chapter of The Elder Brother. Just to be clear, I didn't rewrite the entire chapters, it was more of a "face lift" so to speak. I've changed a few words, removed and added paragraphs, and overall improved the quality of the chapters. I've also renamed the chapters "Act one - growing up" and "Act two - memories" to just "growing up" and "memories" as I felt that the addition of acts

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Dec
21st
2019

The Elder Brother: reincarnated · 11:45am Dec 21st, 2019

So remember how a few years ago I gave up on writing and even gave some of my stories to other people? Welp, a day ago I became really inspired about The Elder Brother and politely asked for it to be returned to me.

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Jan
10th
2019

To all thoes waiting for an update on The Elder Brother · 4:48am Jan 10th, 2019

I'm sorry for a very long wait and not holding up to my word to those I responded to, I just am so sorry I can't figure out how to go about it, every time I try to write it feels like it won't hold up to expectations. I don't want to upset. I'm afraid to write a chapter, I don't want judgement I don't want the backlash or negativity, hell my one story that is my own has only 20 likes, st least its something but.. I don't feel right, but I'll try.

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Dec
25th
2017

Elder Brother once again on hiatus · 12:24am Dec 25th, 2017

Sorry everypony, I am putting Elder brother on hiatus so I can get shit together on it, I need to read through it an well some other things.

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Feb
14th
2017

Happy virgin awareness day, Everypony · 6:35pm Feb 14th, 2017

Well, Happy Valentines Day everypony, or in this case virgin awareness day! YAY!!!!!

Well not YAY. Just look at all the young virgins all over feeling upset because they don't an ssp. feeling the lack of sex on this day, so Happy virgin awareness day!

As of my stories i'm not dead, i will be working on them soon, i just not had the chance because of football, school, and ameno. Yes if you would like to find me on Equestria, you can find me under Lilac Fragrance.

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Jan
22nd
2017

If your wondering what's going on with The Elder Brother · 4:07pm Jan 22nd, 2017

I'm working on it, I'm rereading the chapters to get the story straight and fix any mistakes along with rewriting any chapters that need to be. Just give me some time and I will have a new chapter up.

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Jan
19th
2017

Elder Brother, Side story. · 2:38pm Jan 19th, 2017

How would you feel about me writing a a side story to the elder brother to hold you over until the next chapter is written? it may or may not involve clop. Please tell me in the comments below, and tell me what kind of story you would like to see. (proteins to the story)

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Jan
18th
2017

Elder Brother updates comeing soon..... · 5:08pm Jan 18th, 2017

As you know i got this story in my possession, there are some parts that need some rethinking, such as the part where hes going to war for example. just to say. I'm going to do my best to get this story in order. So what I'm saying is that some of the chapters are going to change. also, leave some suggestions in the comments to help me better the story.



Thank you, that is all

Dash, Out.

Jan
17th
2017

Well, i got the elder brother · 7:36pm Jan 17th, 2017

I will be continuing the work of Yonie: the elder brother. i just got to get everything together so i can do the story properly. and well that's all i have to say.

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Aug
13th
2014

Something that will surely annoy you · 11:08am Aug 13th, 2014

Hey guys, just wanted to give you a heads up on the progress of 'The elder brother'. Now I know this is my most popular story yet, and a lot of you want me to continue writing it, but a much needed comment about the story made me realize that although the story is somewhat good, it's lacking on so many aspects.

Now I'm not saying I'm discontinuing the story per se, but a good revision is needed and it may take me a while to do it, so until then 'The elder brother' is on hold, or so to speak.

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Jun
14th
2014

Changeing focus · 9:13pm Jun 14th, 2014

As some of you may already know, another recent story of mine found it's way into the popular stories box. Due to the unexpected and popularity of 'The Elder Brother', I decided to put the rest of my stories on hold and focus on it.

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Jun
11th
2014

Suggestions... · 2:05am Jun 11th, 2014

As some of you may know, my newly released story 'The Elder Brother' is slowly rising to become my favorite fic (For those of you who need a few doses of D'AWWWWW please click here).

For this story, there can be a lot of different and diverse chapters. Now, I'm not desperate or out of ideas, but if you have an idea for a chapter or a scene for the story, please do share your thoughts.

Have some D'AWWWWWW

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