Chapter 14 for What They Expect to Give is all loaded up and ready to post when the timing is just right. I'm thinking 11 or noonish (Pacific time). It's a shorter chapter than what we've been doing the last few weeks, but IMHO, the content makes up for the length, and it just felt like a good place to stop. I know you guys have your own perception of the story, but I have an ongoing dialogue with my editor that feels contrary to the norm. For instance, I'm a bit bemused that he still