We all know VR is inevitable and games like Sword Art Online, .Hack, and all other derivatives will be soon to follow. But you want to know what would be super awesome? Retro VR. Why play SAO when you could instead go back and play a universally acclaimed classic from our collective childhood, like Jak and Daxter? You'd be able to collect orbs, channel eco, and punch boxes! But more than that, what if you could do all that and more? What if you felt that Sandover village was too small and in

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Sorry to do this, but I'm just so excited. While I should point out it's still going to be an unknown number of months before they're published on this site, I recently finished the fourth chapter of the Discord arc. And, gotta say, I'm stoked. I mean I've been on fire these last couple days. Roughly 18,000 words written in just two days across nine chapters. That's gotta be a personal best for me.

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Horse People is, first and foremost, a slice of life story (even though I'd initially forgotten to include that tag on first publishing). I've got ideas for sub plots and bigger things here and there, but it's mostly these guys just going through their daily lives, routines, and generally inventing activities with which to keep themselves occupied. That said, I find myself at a bit of a loss with the latest onset of writer's block.

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I'm not announcing I'm doing anything especially different. I'm just pointing out what should be obvious. The story that we have now is nothing like what was started. Really, I had no idea this thing would take off as it had. However, there was just so much positive feedback that I felt compelled to give my audience what they wanted.

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As a show of appreciation for all you fine readers, I thought I'd grant a little teaser of events to come. Specifically, the new mares who will be applying to join the harem. More specifically, their boobs, because raisins.

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I have ADD. It's next to impossible for me to sit down and commit to any significant amount of writing on my own. To that end, I used aderal as something of a writing crutch. One good pill and I average about 4,000 words in one sitting. However, my insurance is screwing me over and I might not be able to get the stuff as frequently as I do now, 30 pills for about 3 months. So, to those of you who like my writing, especially Horse People, do you think you'd be willing to pitch in on my Patreon?

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So I thought it'd be fun to embrace the story's slice of life element by writing a sleepover story, and what would such a story be without the classic game of truth or dare? That's what I thought, until I actually started writing it. The whole point is to get everyone to embarrass themselves by doing stupid stuff or confessing secrets. After hitting my first roadblock, I turned to the internet for some fun questions and dares, but none were to my liking. Thing is, with the culture I've set up,

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I've found myself in a position where more and more my characters are going to be speaking casually, as in using slang and slurred words, and I want to be consistent.
For example, I have a southern sounding character. She says "Ah" instead of "I", "mahself" instead of "myself" and "sayin'" instead of "saying." I put apostrophes in place of the "g" to indicate that's how the words are intended to be. But there's one thing that's throwing me for a loop.

"Chya"

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This is a fundamental fact of life, and it's been bugging me. In what's been posted and what has been written but yet to be posted, I have noted that Thomas' relationships with the mares, especially Moonlight, is a little too squeaky clean. I attribute this partially to the fact that, because of my own autism, I really haven't had that many friendships and most of the time we just managed to part ways before getting on each other's nerves. Thomas and Moonlight, however, see each other 24/7.

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I just hit 1000 likes on Horse People Go Naked. Boo-ya!

I'm terrible at shopping for others, which apparently translates to Thomas. That chapter is still a ways off, but I like to prepare. What are some presents he could get for the precious ladies in his life: Luna, Moonlight, Talon, and Silver.

Following my earlier plan of making Blueblood less of a one dimensional character, and in anticipation of an upcoming chapter where this will be directly addressed, I have a few more edits I'd like to run by my readers first.

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Now that I have a more sizable group, I'd like to get myself organized in communicating with you guys. In case it's not clear, all of my work meant to be edited is on Google doc. Now that 76 is posted, I'm gonna need your opinions on 77.

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Some of you might recall Chapter 58 where it was described how Sun Dancer used the minotaur as a mobile throne in a sort of hazing challenge to test his worthiness as one of Celestia's concubines. Beyond getting to know one another on a more interpersonal level, I believe there really should be proper tests that all concubines should go through, starting with the next batch. As it usually goes when I encounter this flavor of writer's block, I'm opening the forum to the fans.

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Believe me when I say that, as angry as you are for my jerking you guys around, I am just as disappointed with myself. I should have talked more with my editors and done this flipflopping before posting, but I didn't. However, now that I've actually done that, I've decided that it is more meaningful (giving a sense of weight to the progress in his various relationships), more thematically appropriate (that there is yet one more thing that makes him feel excluded,

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It seems I have lost track of who has and has not volunteered to help me keep Horse People Go Naked a decent story, which probably explains a lot about the recent controversy. Some people haven't replied in so long that I've forgotten who they are, not to mention my own methods of reporting updates have been rather poor. No more. Hopefully I have learned from my mistakes and will now post updates at the end of the Google doc where the latest chapter is. To that end, I'm also going to need my

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Sorry for jerking you guys around so much. I was overcome by some the very reasonable arguments put forth against including reincarnation. That said, I'm happy it happened as the criticism encouraged me to put some more serious thought into this element and come up with explanations on how it works.

And yes. That means reincarnation is back on.

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Before I say any more, I want to make one thing perfectly clear. I have no real plan for any of my stories, especially Horse People. All I have is a loose connection of unpolished ideas in what can only barely be called a plan. This much should be obvious just by comparing the first ten chapters to the last ten.

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It's the strangest thing. I've read several of these stories, finding few that I really liked, yet I still find myself wanting to write them. I've heard descriptions of the fetish, of getting a thrill about putting the power and control in the hands of another, but have read few that I really liked. A Weekend Maid for Spike https://www.fimfiction.net/story/31982/a-weekend-maid-for-spike remains one of the few that can really appeal to me, but I feel I need more of a grasp of the concept before

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The changes have been made to Chapter 74 of Horse People Go Naked