Reincarnation Changed · 1:48pm Oct 3rd, 2016
The changes have been made to Chapter 74 of Horse People Go Naked
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The changes have been made to Chapter 74 of Horse People Go Naked
You may want to double check that. First Luna says he's the 38th reincarnation of Bronze Aura, her first stallion, then she says he isn't. All within less than three paragraphs of each other.
4238406 Where exactly? Please give me an excerpt of the problem paragraphs.
4238408 Sorry, it was just these three sentences that threw me off. The rest seems fine.
4238425 Simple typo. Thanks for catching.
You may also want to change the authors note at the end of the chapter. That says they are both reincarnated lovers.
4238408 I was hoping it would stay reincarnation
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I can't help but feel that you could have made a joke about the Doctor's Regenerations from Doctor Who.