Updates and editing passes have been completed to parts 13-15 of Turnabout Storm, which take the story through Phoenix's first encounter with Pinkie and second interview of Rainbow, including breaking her psyche-locks and getting the truth from her as to what she was doing near the crime scene that night.
Hey folks...
There has been a fresh eruption of angry words over the Turnabout Storm novelization, and RavenRegios has apparently been bearing the brunt of it. She says she got kicked off another story site along with all her stories for defending the work, and the latest exchanges in the comments section of Turnabout Storm itself has her very upset.
The Derpy/Ditzy/Bright Eyes and Lenora chapters have received their editing passes and overhaul. Mostly minor changes, including the usual merciless removal of all usages of 'violet unicorn' and easing off on elipses, but among other things, I finally
Part 57 - Revealed Racers is the chapter that you'll either remember for Phoenix's long talk with Trixie, or all the Frozen references. As I agree with the benefit of hindsight that I royally overdid the latter, all but one has been removed. And the only reason I kept that one was so I could turn around and subvert it:
Nothing too major changed this time, just a lot of editing, smoothing, and the usual removal of 'violet unicorn' and 'human lawyer'. I've also learned a trick I'll share with you here:
Enhancements this time include a new picture in Part 63 - Trick or Treat, and a more fleshed-out appearance by Celestia at the end of Part 64 - Frozen Heart.
...bringing us to the point of Sonata’s confession. Significant changes were made to both chapters, including some new graphics.
And whoa, was it EVER worth the wait! 
Revelations aplenty, and a conspiracy unravels as Phoenix solves the mystery of the Helios-6 incident and uncovers the true mastermind behind a murder, clearing both his client of the crime and his client's brother of complicity in the deaths of twenty soldiers. Move over Manfried von Karma, Chief Damon, Matt Engarde and Dahlia Hawthorne, for I promise you will NEVER love to hate an Ace Attorney villain as badly as this one. 
I figured I should do an OC for my second reading. After all, some of the canon pony-Arcana matchups are so obvious that they wouldn't be very fun or interesting. (I'm looking at you, Rainbow Dash.) Besides, I think it'd be fun to take a closer look at the extended universe the fandom has created. So today, I'm drawing for...
...Cruise Control. Poor Cruise Control.
Not a winner, but I had a blast (pictures will be available in a future post), and I made some headway on Turnabout Storm chapter revamps as well. No less than four updated chapters were posted last night, meaning the entire story through Part 37 is now updated. Aside from the usual edits, I added some additional details in several places, including how and why Pinkie is able to do metalwork and regarding how exactly Twilight summoned Phoenix and The Judge originally:
Including a new graphic.
Finished off the last two chapters this past weekend. Part 66 - Revelry, Race and Return had no major changes; just the usual cleanup plus a tweak or clarification here and there. For the most part I was already pretty happy with it, though I did make it a point to update one of the graphics:
To all Turnabout Storm readers:
As of today, the Turnabout Storm novelization belongs to me! RavenRegios has very graciously agreed to pass me ownership as she sadly no longer has time to attend to her stories or fimfiction account. 
Please check it out below!
Hey folks, good news--I'm waiting on just one more preread at this point, and then the new The Lawyer and The Unicorn chapter will be released no later than tomorrow morning!
So, apparently they're making a sequel series to Turnabout Storm, known as Elements of Justice. I cannot fully express how much hype I'm feeling for this right now.
I was in the middle of writing Turnabout Reviews when the prosecution forfeits. I honestly have no idea what to do now. I'm like a dog who chased a car, and once it parked, the dog is having an existential crisis. I'm not quite that far, but it was surprising. Anyways, Turnabout Reviews episode two is coming soon.
With Part 59 - Of Mares and Men seeing some hefty additions to the attorney misconduct board scenes.
Before, the hearings were too short, and a major figure was not heard from--The Judge. Now, he has some very pointed things to say about both Phoenix and Trixie's performance during Rainbow Dash's trial, and Fluttershy makes a plea on Phoenix's behalf as well:
There are some fairly major changes this time, especially to Part 30 - Judge Off Court.
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