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Flora Blossom
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TApparition Amphitheater Presents: A Strange Presence Near the Woods
A curious and bitter winter had descended upon the town of Ponyville this year. Strange lights in the sky, disappearances near the woods, the feeling of being watched among the trees. It all makes one ask in fear "Who goes there?"
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Review: Apparition Amphitheater Presents: A Strange Presents Near the Woods

Tags: Dark, Horror

Summary: This fiction reminds me of until dawn a little bit.

Review:  It was pretty interesting… The last chapter was alright I guess…  it was a bit confusing at first. I had to reread the last chapter twice just to make sure… It had that weird vibe.  Which led me to give this at least a 6/10 for me. It did have some weird moments in the fiction like the last chapter.

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Youch, a 6/10. Sorry this one wasn't exactly to your liking. Originally, I was gonna go for a more traditionally and appropriately sinister ending for the story, but considering WHEN i was writing it and feeling in a bit more of a jolly mode, I decided to invoke the "Fluttercord ClauseTM" and do a meta joke before I went for a happier ending.

Incidentally, this story was more inspired by "The Thing", or at least the original short that inspired that story.

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