TDoubts and Anxiety

• MLP: FiM
• Drama
• Sad

Starlight's first friendship lesson is to help out the ponies of Ponyville to connect to the locals better. But what happens when they judge her on her past?

• Alt. Universe
• Twilight
• Spike
• Bon-Bon
• Other
• Starlight Glimmer

Catpaw616 · 8.1k words  ·  20  2 · 488 views

Review: Doubts and Anxiety

Tags: Drama, Sad, Alternate Universe

Summary: This is a sequel to Unforgettable and Unforgivable.

Summary 2: Isn’t the bon-bon post to be Sweetie Drops?

Review: It has a good idea concept, but the grammar needs to be more thought out.  I still enjoy the story, but some of the stuff could be better with grammar. Also, I don’t like full-caps sentences, or bold and slanted words too.

I give this story at least a 7/10 for it.

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Thanks for your honest thoughts about the story. I'll try to improve my grammar as best if I can.

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Usually when I use slanted words it would be like a mail message... That's the only time I would use that. For bold though I would use that for loud ponies but try not to use caps... Because sometimes too many cap sentences could hurt the eyes of the reader.