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Will King Sombra appear or at least get mentioned in this story?
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I don't think he'll appear. I think he was mentioned in passing during Severance as the source of Sombras nickname. Aside from that I'm not too sure. On that note, there are also no plans for Tirek.
Its a bit sad how cynical Symphony have become, letting his friend eat that stuff, shooting at strangers just because of how they look the part of some legends he no longer believe in. While he have fallen far do I really hope that he will regain some of his lost humanity again. Having a character with humanity in the wasteland was such a refreshing experience, we have so many bad guys there are cynical, as seen in last chapters after all. Beside, strangers are friends we do not know yet, not target practice just because they look a bit weird!
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"2.1 Strangers in a Wasteland “There is no safety this side of the grave.” " Consistency is key, and you normally have the title of the chapter in italic, not underlined
"I went to investigate the tents." Linebreak
"“And if she’s not feeling very appreciated," Linebreak
" but somewhat somber," Missing a word after somber
" I gulped it down." Third sentence in a row that start with I, so just saying "Gulping it down" would do.
"But that meant having to leave him. " Linebreak