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Thanks! We're happy to hear that you're enjoying it so far, hope you'll enjoy the rest as well.
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You definitely have some good points. Some of the simplistic/wrong ideas were done intentionally, but there are probably a lot more that could have been more fleshed out. We'll try to keep that in mind for the future. While I can't speak for my editors, I personally do find Orchestra to be a more interesting character. Overall, she's my favorite. However, I didn't think many readers would be willing to read a story with an unapologetic bigot for a protagonist.
TL;DR, your comments are greatly appreciated, and we are glad to know you're enjoying the story so far.
Normally do I not mind spoiling a few things to praise them, but damn you for making the biggest things plot twists that gives me whiplash with how quickly we get turned around!
Let me just say that it was a shitty more, and I would have started the tagging with a rusty meatclever... to the private parts.
Don't think it should be "an electronic", and funny story, one of my first encounters with Fo was watching one of my close friends play Fo3 on PC. He was new to the game and encountered some mirelurks, not having figured the trick about head and belly shots out yet, so he threw grenade after grenade at them with SATS and was yelling at the screen about how little damage they did... Until he remembered that they were EMP and facepalmed over how many caps he just had wasted.
And welp... Yet again, did not see that ending coming. You will be the death of me, writing so much quality in so few chapters!
Nitpick:
"He rolled towards the greeting card stand" Something ate your line before this sentence