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Well I hope Caltrop saves her then maybe she will learn to like him, also good chapter
Dear Luna, that was awesome! Is it, "think of painful ways to murder Brightshine" time now?
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I'm glad you both enjoyed it!
And don't worry, I indeed have some very special stuff reserved for Brightshine.
Well, at least she's less of an asshole.
And, no explosions.
Sometimes the most horrific of situations is what makes our true..er..pony come to light, shedding the hard shell we put up to prevent the inevitable heartache we all try to delay. Guess what i'm saying is, this chapter is flippin awsome
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I'm glad you enjoyed it and got the message I was trying to get across. The idea that PC had everything normal taken from her up to this point was fine, because she felt that she still had enough control in her life to make things better. This chapter took that control from her, and then Caltrop gave it back, which to PC, cements the fact that she can't be alone anymore. She needs somepony with her who's got her back, because she now shudders to think what will happen when he's not there.
I just realized the links to new chapters of this fic weren't showing up in my feed because I hadn't added it to my favorites.
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Whoray! Thanks for faving it
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Yeah! We missed you around here! I'm glad you liked it, and I hope you had a good couple of holidays!
hot
I mean.
OHNOES Player Character's need for control has been exposed! As has her Electric Resistance stat! She'd probably have trouble dealing with a cloud-combat specialist. Zap zapidityzappyzapPOMF.
I mean uh. That has nothing to do with E-stim. Nothing to do with E-stim at all~~~(?)
*Removes the happyfuntime mask.*
Nah, I don't particularly care for rape scenes in fiction, and I don't really intent to trivialize real rape either with my causal dismissal of the gravity of the scenario in the fic, but in cases like these where the present scenario is something I don't care for, I try to latch onto the fragments of what I do like and revel in it. In this case, I'm having entirely too much fun witnessing a stallion indulging whatever fetish he seems to have for eletrojolting? Or maybe his kink is just the general domination thing, which is not nearly as silly-musing.I kinda wish I could indulge in my own guilty pleasures as much and not suffer for it. I also firmly believe there's an entire story just on the theme of a pony trying to reconcile where fetishistic vices is quashed by their virtue, and what part of their existence do they find most worth struggling for. And I suppose that, more or less, is why Jolt Climax resonates with me. I know what it's like to have an opportunity to indulge whatever unrelated interest comes up in the middle of a scenario in which it would be completely misunderstood, gone unnoticed, and left me relatively distanced from the actual dullness of all the other aspects of whatever scenario of the day. And I suppose to write about that far-away here-but-not-here appearance, writer must be at least passingly familiar with that experience or the idea. Penetrative of a victim or not, I suppose the morality of these matters ends at 'Is someone or will someone at any point in the future be harmed by this action?' And in this case, it seems harm was a requirement for his indulgence.
Then again, he kinda beat what's her face with his hoof, which is not fun at all and is direct and willful arm. And while I could say whatever about how just being slain in return is, ultimately all living ponies die regardless of karma. (Arguably, living longer in the wasteland is more of a punishment for hard work than a reward... unless those hours of additional life are spent in joy. But is a short life with tons of fun in the wastelands any lesser than a long life of all struggle and no pleasure?)
And besides, he'd probably have been killed for doing his job anyway, even if Player Character had successfully taken the prod to begin with.
Either way, I'll probably file this chapter under 'liking it for reasons the author probably did not intend'.
*MoM party time funmask on face again.*
8/10 squeaks, I could pop to this! Yay, fic!
Anywho, neat.
FIREFLYYY
Yeah, I could tell Brightshine wasn't to be trusted. This should be a turning point for the not so tough Percussion Cap, to admit that she needs friends as much as anyone else.