Trixie and Starlight make a cute couple, at least any future kisses can’t be worse (Better) than that. And poor Twi didn’t even get some release after all that. Well, she’ll have some time to herself while those two recuperate. And you never know, perhaps they’ll come done there again sometime...
Amazing how, in the one outcome, a mere moment of hesitation made such a difference in the overall outcome. That one mili-second of Twilight's hesitation got her to start rationalizing all sorts of things she'd never before have considered rationalizing.
For this outcome, I could only imagine Spike eventually getting a search party started until they found the three. Would they have all been mentally 'converted' by this point? Or would Spike and pals' efforts be in time to spare Starlight and Trixie such a fate?
I wonder if, at some point, Princess Luna would have been able to enter one of their dreams in the outcome where they are all trapped? Or would the inhibitor ring also keep Princess Luna from gaining access to their dreams? Maybe the AI would create a sort of ethereal distraction that would act like chaff to stop Luna, or any pony, from discovering their location?
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The second outcome leaves Twilight in quite the pickle. Could she ever return to the room? Could she ever dare turn the machine back on? What if the memories and improved AI would be like GLADIS from "Portal" and seek a sort of 'revenge' for what Twili did to it?
Then you have Trixie and starlight. Those two really had a moment beyond moments that made things awkward. This also leads to how Twilight did want to get out ASAP in case of any other unexpected surprises from the AI. Could the AI, in this case, be like the Terminator in T2 and have a backup route to an alternative power supply? Could it switch itself back on as Trixie and Starlight rested?
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Definitely an enjoyable story that leaves a lot of open imagination room for the various outcomes of this event. *Applause* Great job!
9631875 You have so many great ideas for how this could've gone, I love them! Wish I had the time, cause I'd love to write out Starlight's attempts to undo everything, or Trixie's revenge schemes. Nevertheless, I'm glad you enjoyed my fic all the way through
This is honestly your best story yet. I loved everything about it, literally everything.
I kinda want to know if you might make a sequel eventually or at least a story with a similar premise. That being ponies get trapped by uncontrollable robot in diaper sex dungeon.
9635445 It would be very appreciated. i am also probably not the only one interested in more.
The story hit almost every fetish I have, only mind control/hypnosis was left out. Not that I mind it is still a really great story and adding more might put others off.
I will certainly read this story again at least a few more times though.
I really loved this story. Definitely one of your best Clop with Plot stories. I eagerly await your next project!
Trixie and Starlight make a cute couple, at least any future kisses can’t be worse
(Better)than that. And poor Twi didn’t even get some release after all that. Well, she’ll have some time to herself while those two recuperate. And you never know, perhaps they’ll come done there again sometime...9631353
Thanks! I doubt my next project is going to be anywhere near as hefty as this one, but I hope you enjoy it regardless!
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If it's good for you, then it's the good ending
Also, obviously Twilight's going to want to get that Plan B as many times as she can. Why wouldn't she?
9631382
Haha length doesn't matter, what matters most is content and of course the author's enjoyment of writing it!
I get the feeling that getting Trixie to keep quiet will involve holding her against her will for a bit.
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You mean, more than she already has been?
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Not quite in the same way but yeah.
Well this was a fun read, I would have gone with the bad end, but both were fun. I can't wait to see what you will come up with next
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Thanks! I honestly couldn't decide which ending I preferred, so I just had to include them both.
Amazing how, in the one outcome, a mere moment of hesitation made such a difference in the overall outcome. That one mili-second of Twilight's hesitation got her to start rationalizing all sorts of things she'd never before have considered rationalizing.
For this outcome, I could only imagine Spike eventually getting a search party started until they found the three. Would they have all been mentally 'converted' by this point? Or would Spike and pals' efforts be in time to spare Starlight and Trixie such a fate?
I wonder if, at some point, Princess Luna would have been able to enter one of their dreams in the outcome where they are all trapped? Or would the inhibitor ring also keep Princess Luna from gaining access to their dreams? Maybe the AI would create a sort of ethereal distraction that would act like chaff to stop Luna, or any pony, from discovering their location?
***
The second outcome leaves Twilight in quite the pickle. Could she ever return to the room? Could she ever dare turn the machine back on? What if the memories and improved AI would be like GLADIS from "Portal" and seek a sort of 'revenge' for what Twili did to it?
Then you have Trixie and starlight. Those two really had a moment beyond moments that made things awkward. This also leads to how Twilight did want to get out ASAP in case of any other unexpected surprises from the AI. Could the AI, in this case, be like the Terminator in T2 and have a backup route to an alternative power supply? Could it switch itself back on as Trixie and Starlight rested?
***
Definitely an enjoyable story that leaves a lot of open imagination room for the various outcomes of this event. *Applause* Great job!
9631875
You have so many great ideas for how this could've gone, I love them! Wish I had the time, cause I'd love to write out Starlight's attempts to undo everything, or Trixie's revenge schemes. Nevertheless, I'm glad you enjoyed my fic all the way through
Ayy, another great story from a great writer
Great series and i like how you included 2 endings. One for good and the other for fun
Also liked how starlight and trixie got something out of the experience.
Keep up the great work
9631974
Thanks! Glad you were able to get something out of the experience too.
This is honestly your best story yet.
I loved everything about it, literally everything.
I kinda want to know if you might make a sequel eventually or at least a story with a similar premise. That being ponies get trapped by uncontrollable robot in diaper sex dungeon.
9635008
Thanks!
Dunno about a sequel, considering the situation with the endings. Maybe some non-canon bonus chapters in the future? I certainly have... ideas.
9635445
It would be very appreciated. i am also probably not the only one interested in more.
The story hit almost every fetish I have, only mind control/hypnosis was left out. Not that I mind it is still a really great story and adding more might put others off.
I will certainly read this story again at least a few more times though.
This was a great story to read!
9644312
Thanks! I'm glad you liked it
Huh...
...huh...
9965540
Sorry about that, there just wasn't room for it in this one. But they did get plenty of "moments" together if that helps