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Heroic412227


Hi, my name is Heroic412227, but you can call me Heroic. I'm still learning how to be the best writer I can be.

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  • 9 weeks
    I've Finally Finished My New Story!

    ETwilight Learns How to Ice-Skate
    Twilight wants to learn how to ice-skate to impress Flash.
    Heroic412227 · 4.3k words  ·  14  2 · 422 views

    What do you think?

    0 comments · 68 views
  • 11 weeks
    My New Song Lyric Writing Style

    Ominous: What are we even talking about?
    Everybody had messed up already
    We threw ourselves down the void without doubt
    This discussion is senseless and petty

    There's no question to be posed
    We're all evil, case closed
    Did you forget everything that we’ve done?

    We all are beyond help
    And that includes myself
    And that's why I’ve got no choice but

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    0 comments · 73 views
  • 14 weeks
    I'm Going to Review OCs

    Hey there, everyone. After some thinking, I've decided that, instead of trying to get my own OCs reviewed by others, I'm going to try something different and review others' OCs. It's a fun idea and I can't wait to see the OCs that others have made.

    If you have any OCs that you'd like to be reviewed, please let me know and I'll tell you about my thoughts on them.

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    4 comments · 153 views
  • 18 weeks
    Which Character Do You Relate To The Most and Why?

    Hey there, everyone! You know? I've thinking about this idea for quite a while, but was too nervous to show it due to being not wanting to create any spoilers until it was fully realized yet. But thanks to a great friend's advice, I've decided to give it a shot to see your opinions on them so far.

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    0 comments · 177 views
  • 21 weeks
    Here's an Update

    I know I promised myself not to reveal anything until it's done, but due to writer's block, perfectionism, and procrastination, I'm having trouble finishing a certain story that needs to get done before any unexpected circumstances and complications. While I'm not going to spoil what I'm working on until it's absolutely done, I need some advice on this predicament that I'm having in order to

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    0 comments · 106 views
Mar
19th
2022

Zero Two Lyrics (Ominous Parody) · 7:17pm Mar 19th, 2022

Based off of this:

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Endless goodness, endless grace
A light that spreads through time and space
All the pain will surely break
Only in dreams can we all make it

Sounds of hatred, eldritch horns
Cry for the one from nothing born
All that’s bad will now be gone
Now come, false hero from beyond!

When you look into the stars
You’ll see the light dispelling all the dark
The zion, living
All will come to understanding

Those who left the gateway open
Into our hearts, into the stars
For as long as there is bad
The creeping shade will make us sad

From the darkness comes the sorrow
Born to end every tomorrow
A miracle of brightness rising
All that’s evil now colliding

Spirits cry on tails of blood
Suck up the tears to end the flood
And as corruption leaves our heroes
All that’s worse will fall to zero

Can’t you feel the rumble of the coming storm?
Reality lies upon the edge of thorns
The power that is borrowed
Will all guarantee tomorrow
Beyond the omniverse will ease right out the sorrow sworn

Rise and fall
This is our call
We weep, we scream
We dare not dream

Seraphim, our messenger arrives
To send a sign across the sky
Is there good within us?
Or are we just empty husks?

Those who look over the skyline
Look down at me!
Do you hear me?

As you fly to guard your sins,
The light will cleanse out all within

Endless goodness, endless grace
A light that spreads through time and space
All the pain will surely break
Only in dreams can we all make it

Sounds of hatred, eldritch horns
Cry for the one from nothing born
All that’s bad will now be gone
Now come, false hero from beyond

Can’t you feel the calling of the endless curse?
All that is tainted beyond the omniverse
Sealed for ten millennia
We’ve come so far
Seen the dark reflected
In our very hearts

The paein of the bells
Rings out a melody to all
And deep inside the darkness
Drowns a beating fell beast’s heart

I think I'm starting to get better at songwriting.

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Comments ( 3 )

Replace bad with worse in the 'tails of blood' verse.

Worse than corruption is just pure evil.

And everything vile in the 'fall to zero' verse

What do you think?

Otherwise damn fine.

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It looks great. Thanks.

I think it's fine the way it is. Good job!

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