About 'Dreams of Forever'

I've decided to rework some of the aspects of the story, the changes may or may not be substantial in those first 11+1 chapters. I wasn't happy with how things started to turn out by chapter 26, and there were too many issues that demotivated me to keep going. I've identified 8 major issues so far that I would like to address before resubmitting the story, and I would like to redo the first three chapters into something a bit more coherent and less rushed.

Sorry if you saw the initial state and were disappointed or liked it how it was. I still plan to make this an epic, but I need to think through the story a bit more.

- The That One Strange Fellow