Jul
29th
2021
Audience Poll · 1:15am Jul 29th, 2021
I know I've dabbled in it here and there before, but Distracting Derriere was my first ever proper venture into hyper porn through and through. Being somewhat of a rookie with this stuff, it's lead me to ask two questions:
1. Do you guys actually it even like hyper stuff or is it too much for your tastes?
2. For those that do enjoy hyper, was it actually any good? Was there anything missing or something that could be been handled better to make it hotter?
Let me know your thoughts.
Not really my thing, but not off putting if the writing is good.
I thought it was fair.
There's nothing wrong with Hyper. The Steak and Potatoes of porn is always good, but there's nothing wrong with indulging in a slab of rich-cheesecake type of porn.
As long as it doesn't destroy the-way-you-write, I'm fine with it.
Generally not into hyper all that much myself.
But I do like ass.🍑
I absolutely love hyper content, and thought it was quite good. The only things that I can think of about making it better is describing the characters sizes in greater detail throughout the whole story. I've found that It's the little added details throughput a story that gives a story involving hypers that extra "Oomph". Even if it's just one to a couple extra sentences. Such as how deep Dusk's bulge reached between Pinkie's cheeks, and how he might hear/feel the cum in his balls sloshing around. Same would go with pinkie's cum belly and ass. Like how it audibly sloshes around when she walked to the soda machine, and how far down it hung from her body even when supporting it with both her arms. Or how much further out her ass was to even her sides then even her shoulders, and how far it sticks out behind her. This added detail would help in describing each characters sizes in the readers eye better too. Such as in stead of saying that Dusk's cock is thicker than a thigh. Describing it as thicker than even Pinkie's thigh after detailing how massive Pinkie's ass is earlier gives a better picture to hoe massive Dusk or any other hyper hung character might be.
5561448
100 percent agree
Well, as a lover of "Hyper" things, I must say that to be your ... I would not say first, because I remember that you had done something similar in another story. But maybe I'm getting confused.
Anyway, the story was vastly good, not to mention that to be your first story (I repeat, I think you had already done another) it was very entertaining.
Things you could improve? I don't think, at least, you've made a good start on the Hyper thing. You should see one more story, to really see what you could improve. Since the descriptions were good. the sex was fluid and very enjoyable, as well as fun with Dusk and Pinkie's interactions with clients. Porn and comedy? for me it is a + SSS
I enjoy hyper porn myself and I agree with everything 5561449 said.
I don't really love hyper, but you do make it work. As long as you keep writing the great smut you always do while incorporating it i don't mind, but i admit i prefer it looking like an actually physically possible body.
I don’t mind hyper much. It’s not one of my niches but I don’t quite dislike it. So I won’t write it off outright if the story works well.
Hyper is always a win in my book, though, it's best when kept to a scale that can be envisioned, meaning no mares with tits the size of *literal* mountains. At that point, it just becomes confusing.
I don't like hyper. I actually love big; big cocks, big hips, big lips. But they should all be 'big' not unnatural. If you're going to do it try to make it about as big as is reasonable. Like don't have a mare that is wider than she is long.
Not really into hyper, but liked your story.
I didn't really see anything in your story that was overtly hyper. Big sure, maybe even ridiculously big, but when I think hyper I think of sizes beyond description. Mountain size etc
I don’t judge how people write their stories. It’s not a big deal for me.
5561522
I agree, big fan of hyper but there is a upper limit before it becomes ridiculous or even pointless. Why have a dick the size of a skyscraper if they can't move to have sex. Never could get into the one's where it's just the growth.
I'll have you know that hyper is good for me. It's in my name and all
Never been one to enjoy hyper myself. The story was okay, but the hyper just takes things too over the top for me.
Not really a hyper fan. I mean, huge endowments are nice and all, but when it passes a certain point it just feels kinda...'illusory'. Like, we all admire the prowess and magnificance of a fire breathing dragon, yet deep inside we also know that it's a production of fantasy.A boobjob, hoofjob or even wingjob is one thing, while a magicjob (which somehow appears in Twilight fics more often than I expected) is ... something else.
But hey, you do you. If hyper is your thing then keep doing it. Have been enjoying all your stories so far, especially those with impregnation content. Wish that you can keep writing what keeps your passion burning!
Normally is hyper not my thing, but you have a wonderful way to write it, so that the story was a blast to read. If you would write more hyper stories, i would be very pleased