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    Rewrites to Üā Sūt Cktüis (How to be Dragon)

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  • 139 weeks
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  • 170 weeks
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  • 188 weeks
    Feel free to criticize.

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Jun
10th
2021

Rewrites to Üā Sūt Cktüis (How to be Dragon) · 12:02pm June 10th

Rambling alert!

I'm going back and rewriting sections of Üā Sūt Cktüis (How to be Dragon). I have unpublished all chapters but the prologue. What i am doing is both major and minor. The plot will be remain the basically the same but some characterization is expanded upon, tweaked, or rewritten and I have added some world building where it was... frankly missing (see prologue)

The Prologue(which will turn to chapter 1 after the rewriting is done) is being nearly completely rewritten (rewrote all but the first few paragraphs and a few sentences here) with the adding of nearly 1,000 words(which nearly doubles the length)

Most other chapters will largely be the same with only a few hundred word worth of changes mainly with a few scenes expanded a bit and fixing any continuity errors that will crop up from the major rewrites.

The exception will be what will be chapters 3, 4, and 5 (formally 2, 3, &4) huge chunks are being more or less heavily edited with part of the end of 3 being moved to 4 and being played out with a different character and some things expanded on a bit though none will be as badly rewritten as the 'prologue.'

Now I'm sure you might be asking if you should reread it? yes you will need to( at least 1, 3, 4, and 5). Too much will be adjusted to try and start at the newest chapter(which I'm working on) These rewrites are moving very fast so i suspect it will be a week or two to be done. You will know when its done as I will be posting a "new" chapter 1(leaving the old Prologue alone) and just in case that doesn't catch everyone the newest chapter(10 under the new numbering) will have an AN at the beginning the new chapter as a secondary HEY u need to reread the story

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