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Lucar


A French brony who loves to read and write. My English is not perfect, but I will do my best!

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  • 6 weeks
    TV Tropes Page Apple Bloom's Mansion

    Someone made a TV Tropes page about the Apple Bloom's Mansion saga.

    Link.

    I made quite the number of tropes without knowing, lol.

    1 comments · 58 views
  • 9 weeks
    Subspace Army Tree Before Chapter 168

    Here is the tree showing the officers' ranks in the Subspace Army before chapter 168. I advise to read the chapter first before seeing the image.

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  • 10 weeks
    "New" Story and New Group

    I'm starting to write a new story, or not really. It will actually be a compilation of stories in the universe of UME. Tales From The Omniverse. More than a compilation, this is a group made by Cyrus Colter there. In this group, people will be able to post their Tales happening in UME's universes.

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    5 comments · 159 views
  • 12 weeks
    Sizes Precision

    With A Sweetie Dream Land's rewriting, I have changed some sizes.

    As of the starts of A Sweetie Dream Land, Kirby was 20cm tall. A Waddle Dee is about 30cm, Dedede, about one meter, Meta Knight, over 30cm (maybe 35cm, not sure yet), and Sweetie Void, about 50cm.

    By the time of The Forgotten Land, Kirby is 30cm tall, and Sweetie is about 60cm.

    0 comments · 144 views
  • 12 weeks
    Rewriting A Sweetie Dreamland

    I'm going to start to rewrite A Sweetie Dreamland, essentially to change the verb tenses. I'm also going to change "Dreamland" to "Dream Land", maybe change a few lines here and there, and so on. I don't know how long it will take, but I think that I should be done before the end of February.

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Apr
26th
2021

What Should I do? · 12:26am Apr 26th, 2021

Did it ever happen to you that there was something you were so looking forward to do you had a hard time doing anything else? That's exactly what's happening to me.

I WANT to write the chapter with Sweetie Belle slaughtfighting Genocide Frisk.

I just CAN'T wait to write it.

And because of it, I have a difficult time writing the next chapter of the story. As soon as I start focusing on writing, I start to think about this fight and to get new ideas of how Sweetie will kill Frisk. Heck, I even think about it when I don't write, and I even dream of it.

I'm just OBSESSED with this fight! It's horrible! :rainbowlaugh:

It was still okay back when I just wrote the preview (which will be slightly different) even if I had to physically restrain myself from just writing the whole fight. But since I finished writing Sweetie Belle's adventure during a Pacifist Run, I'm losing my mind!

So I ask you this: what should I do? Would it be okay if I write the fight in advance? Maybe as a separate chapter or in a blog post? The advantage is that there shouldn't be any spoilers about what happens between the current chapter and this one, so it is totally possible for me to write the chapter now without ruining her other adventures. Then I would add the chapter to the story itself once I reach its point (which won't be before some months).

Comments ( 20 )

Just make an omake, Or have it be her visiting at an unspecified time and messing with the song of time or something.

Just read it, no problems, it’s fine as a blog post or omake... loved it
... would want to play as fan game (would probably be a game that causes rage quits.

You can write it and then just not publish until the story actually gets there?

I understand your eagerness to write that chapter of the story. Maybe you can go ahead and write the fight as a chapter, but wait to publish it until the story gets to that point. That way, you won't have to think about writing the genocide chapter as you work on the rest of your story.

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It's not just about writing, it's also about sharing it with you guys, having a good laugh together at watching Frisk being killed again and again in funny (and sometime disturbing, scary, etc...) ways Mario's Castle Calamity style.

So I suppose that I will write it in a blog like 5506719 agreed.

5506751
Please, This is literally one of the most interesting sweetie fight concepts

5506764
I imagine. Sweetie Belle is far too powerful for Frisk, but Frisk won't just stay dead. Something will have to be done or this fight will last forever.

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No, frisk is determined... but not if she is “bed trapped”
(Make the respawn area an instant death zone.

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Where would be the fun in this? Beside, Frisk must be convinced to not redo a genocide behind Sweetie's back, so she will have to do much worst than a simple spawn kill loop.

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It wouldn’t last forever

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Oh, trust me. In Undertale, Chara is often considered a demon.

Sweetie Belle is much worse.

She can do things you can't imagine.

Frisk has no idea what he's up against, and will quickly regrets not listening.

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... it will be like a cat and a mouse

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More like a tiger or a lion and a mouse.

I'd like to see Phantom and Apple Death do their own thing against Frisk. It will give possibilities.
5507086
I think the same

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Eh, Death Blossom (Google it) would just phase through the floor, instakill on contact with no chance to avoid, and then claim their SOUL to stop the RESET ability in its tracks.

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There is still the problem of the SOUL immediately breaking upon death. The SOUL would need to be absorbed right out of Frisk's still living body, and as the game said, it will ask a huge quantity of energy to do it (maybe even more since it's a (partially) human SOUL and not a monster SOUL). The question is: do they have enough energy? Are they powerful enough?

I would mostly see the fight in a separate story. Perhaps you can write the fight as it's own separate story or you could write a story where Frisk goes the genocide route that way you can have Sweetie Belle fight them in that story. That or you could write it as one chapter.

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Why don't you just make it a one-shot chapter that's non-canon to the rest of the fic. That way you can type it up without messing up the rest of the plot.

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I thought about this, but no. While the chapter may look like a stand-alone that could be non-canon, it will still have some elements that could be important for the future of the story, like the fact that Sans is a freaking good fighter when he decides to act. Yes, we saw him fight already, but he wasn't serious.

When will sweetie encounter the other 2, and I suggest you watch terminal montage's Something about series because i would LOVE Sweetie Belle to encounter the clusterBEEP that is that clump of dimensions.

Who knows? Maybe an Alternate Sweetie Belle could happen.

Also because I want to see sweetie's reaction to MEME Nova.

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