She's looking at you. Yes you. And she is judging you with her eyes. There is no escape.
Any help would be appreciated. There's like... 30 pages to edit. And I've spent so long looking at these words that I can no longer see them. No, don't ask me to explain that. It's just a thing that happens.
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Looked good to me, I kind of expected a Luna talks to celestial part but apparently twilight smacking her over the head with it was not enough
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That is the next chapter.
Each chapter has to remain true to its naming theme. This chapter will be called Almanac Avocado.
I like the kid and it fits great in the story. It’s just a thing that I can’t turn off some times is as hitchcock said if the hero calls the cops in act one there is no more movie, I want to see the movie (or work of fiction in general) were they do
It looks amazing... but oh Luna, what will you do?
I loved it! Very close to perfect, had one or two suggestions that I left in the Google Doc. I wanna know what future is ahead of our little spy pony.