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Feb
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I had too much fun with this · 1:08am Feb 5th, 2021

Fancy Mark hated walking in hallways, especially ones with mirrors in them. Unfortunately, the place that he was staying in had mirrors in every other hallway he walked down. He had half a mind to request that servants where he was staying to cover all of the mirrors that were in the hallway that he had to walk down to get to his room. He didn't feel like talking to Fancy Dark today, or any day for that matter. Those conversations always scared him beyond comprehension.

“Well, hello, friend!”

Fancy Mark whipped around and saw his darker ego standing in the mirror behind him. The mirror was fully black and white, the gold trim now lined with blue and red distortion. In the center of it all stood an almost exact version of Fancy Mark. His, no, its fully black eyes seemed to emanate a dark aura. Its hair was dull, but neatly done, unlike Mark’s. 

“Not today, Dark, I’m busy.” Fancy Mark shook slightly, his fear starting to become visible.

“Oh, come now, I missed you! Did you miss me?” Fancy Dark chuckled with a growling distortion.

“No, you monster, I’ll never miss you.” Mark tried to hold his ground, to not let his fear show any further. Suddenly, he collided with the floor, as if somepony had body-slammed him. Fancy Dark peered down at him with a sneer. 

“Oh, Mark, don’t you remember?” Fancy Dark’s almost caring demeanor quickly changed into one of rage. “I’m you! I’m your best friend!” It smiled a little. “I’ll always be here… Forever! Your functions are mine to control, Mark, they always have been and always… will…. be.” Fancy Mark’s body relaxed slightly from it’s previously tensed position, and Mark scooted up against the opposite wall, hyperventilating. “Remember, Fancy Mark, as soon as you slip up, as soon as you fail your eternal task, I’ll be there. I’ll be waiting to help. I’m always here…” The mirror seemed to begin to be restored to its previously beautiful state. “What? Oh, it’s that pink one.” Fancy Dark let out a seemingly genuine smile. “We can talk later, Mark. Remember, my offer still stands. I can give… you… everything.”

The conversation ended exactly how he thought it would. Pinkie Pie turned the corner at the end of the hallway. She saw him cowering on the floor, staring at the opposite mirror with wide eyes.

Fancy Dark is largely inspired by Darkiplier, partially because I can't come up with anything else, Darkiplier isn't copyrighted (as far as I know), and I think a connection between the two universes might be fun to make, considering it's amazing.

Also it's a snek pek of a story I'm writing with a friend
Her story will take a while, so ya'll gotta wait for context

Hehehe, I'll be waiting patiently to meet all of you... See you all soon... HAHAHHA

Comments ( 2 )

I can't wait to read more it sounds intristing

Sounds whack. I dig it.

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