Equestrian Black Crusade rewrite displaced admissions · 8:45pm Sep 7th, 2020
To any and all Displaced Writers interested, Kirito, BronyParasite and I have begun the remake of a large scale Displaced War, and am currently seeking more writers who wish to add their displaced to this grand event!
Any Displaced who participate in the war will be granted one wish (Within limits and reason) by the end, though the victorious side will receive a greater wish.
There will be two factions of which writers can join: the Heroic Wardens, who fight to end Multiversal conflict and protect those who need aid, and the New Black Legion, led by the insidious Warmaster Ahriman, who seeks to dominate and destroy all who oppose him.
The story will be taking place within the universe of Warhammer 40,000, and will fight across an entire star system known as the Cadian System.
A link to the character sheets template for any displaced interested In joining. Please PM me the completed sheets once you have finished
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pORrkhiNXVshyw4vMzCjlKe_unWa8EJvu299QOG7FGA/edit
So we our submitted displaced don’t have to be from a story we did?
That... is honestly something you'd have to ask Kirito about, honestly
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Hm? As in Kirito from SAO?
Here’s the submission I tried to link.
Name: Kai Mushu
Alias: Kai
Displaced As: A grey Warden from dragon age
Gender: male
Race: Human
Age: 20
Personality: Kind and willing to help but does what needs to be done when it counts.
Likes: Grey wardens, helping others, people with good hearts, history, magic and RTSs
Dislikes: Bullies, people who seek to harm others, people who think themselves better than the rest and monsters.
Morality: Lawful good.
FoC: Wardens.
Wish: for his friends and family to join him in his current world.
Wish Outcome: Kai’s family would join him in his equestria.
Powers: A Grey warden’s ability to sense Dark-spawn which has been tuned to sense warp energies. (Thought I add a bit more because I can)
Equipment: Grey warden armour, Longsword and a large shield.
Strengths: Good melee fighter, excellent field commander, experienced warrior
Weaknesses: Ranged attacks, counter to sword and shield, his willingness to help others, his love for Avatar Twilight sparkle
Subordinates/Related Characters: Twilight Sparkle, Warden General Ironbane, Warden commander Cross, Warden commander Ghash.
Units: Grey warden’s 1st, 3rd, 5th and 10th companies (roughly 8,000 men plus support personnel)
Backstory: Kai Mushu was displaced as a grey warden in a equestria with certain ties to the dragon age universe (i.e they have their own version of the maker and their own blights but they happen more frequently) where he came across the CMC being attacked by timber wolves, after a brief but brutal fight Kai was able to hold the wolves back long enough for Applejack, RD, rarity and Twilight to come to their rescue. After treating his injuries at the ponyville hospital it was decided that he would stay at princesses Twilight's castle for the foreseeable future, over time he would befriend many of ponyville and even earned the heart of Twilight herself as well as fighting bandits, monsters and eventually Darkspawn. When the Darkspawn entered the picture Kai proposed to create his own version of the grey wardens to combat them to which the princesses accepted, in addition they also helped remove the high risk of dying during the joining thanks to equestrian magic crafting, some of the first members of this new grey warden order were Warden General Ironbane, High mage Twilight sparkle and Warden commander's Cross and Ghash. As of the present day things have calmed down for the Equestrian Wardens and there have been talks of marriage between High Warden Kai and High mage Sparkle.
Appearance: His armour would look like this but would have some exotic designs of your choice on the chest-plate and arms, he would also have a cape that would go down to his waist. His sword would have a lion’s head on the hilt and his shield would be triangular in shape and have the grey warden flag on it.
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5350684
Nah, that's what we usually call him
This guy
5350686
Thanks man, we'll let you know if your character is accepted or not
5350689
Ohhh
5350695
Your welcome!
5350704
We need better clarification on what exactly his powers are, but other than that, it's looking good so far
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His powers are really just that he can sense dark-spawn, the reason why I thought a simple “grey warden abilities” would be enough is because most people who are fans of dragon age would know what a grey warden’s power is.
But I’ll make the edit alll the same.
Update: I changed the ability slightly now Kai can sense warp energies since I doubt dark spawn are gonna be in the Cadia system.
5350605
This is correct. It doesn’t have to be a character from one of your stories if you want.
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Heh technically my submission IS from a displaced story I did but I cancelled it due to lack of interest, still at least it’s main character can have a chance of seeing the light of day again.
Hey I just had a thought, do you think you could make a Wiki about this story like the events surrounding it and what not?
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Is there any update on the story? I’m sure I’m not the only one thinking about this.