Chapter 4 Author's notes · 6:17pm Jul 11th, 2020
Finally a chapter I'm proud of!
It's not that I hate my previous chapters, but this is around the point where my writing really started picking up in quality.
It's also in this chapter I realised I have a pretty good talent for writing horrifying scenes. At least imo, the last scene of the chapter was one of my favourite things I've written (at last this early, there's a scene in chapter 5 that I'm even prouder of, and scenes in chapter 7 that are really cool as well)
Also, another thing I liked a lot about writing this chapter is that I finally had more characters to work with. It's hard to make a character do things without any sort of motivation other than "find my mom lol"
"Gotta find dad"
"Gotta find my son"
Gotta find Bethesda's creative writing.
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Same lol. I kinda wanted to parody it, but without making it a full-on plot element.