Very fortunate to live in Baltimare, Mareland.
I don't know about you, but this is my idea of a perfect morning!
(It would be even more perfect if I was snuggled up with her! 
)
Should anypony be interested, Cyonix from My Little Reviews & Feedback has done a rather in-depth review of Double Trouble: The Flaws Within1. You can read it it here:
Gone to the Dark Side...of sorts.
Been saving up, and just bought a fitbit versa 2. Mostly--very mostly--for the heart and sleep monitoring functions...cuz when you have five sleep disorders, cardiac arrhythmia and AFib, well...
...inquiring minds just wanna know.
Not sure what happened, but I sat down to do some writing...
I've absolutely no interest in writing, or reading, or anything, to thee point of mental and physical nauseau.
Sorry, and forgive me.
Should anypony be interested, Cyonix from My Little Reviews & Feedback has done a rather in-depth review of Double Trouble: The Flaws Within1. You can read it it here:
Double Trouble: The Flaws Within Review
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1Seems like I'm the biggest flaw within 
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Oh gosh, I never meant to create that impression!
I suppose I do focus a little too much on problems in my reviews, it's something I've been struggling with a lot when I write these things. Though honestly, it's difficult to look at a story as long as I've looked at yours and not get fixated on anything flawed
I know. But there is more than a kernel of truth to that, too. I'm used to writing fiction: Science Fiction & Fantasy, but, as I've been learning, fanfiction is a somewhat different bushel of oats. Readers of fanfiction have different expectations than do readers of authors like Mercedes Lackey and David Weber (who just--entirely incidentally, of course
--happen to be my two favorite authors).
Based upon that juxtaposition, I really can't disagree with a single thing you've noted. It's just, I think, it felt as if there was little to like about the story as compared to what was lacking. Then again, it has given me a great deal of insight and information, and, to be honest, it's not as if others have not noticed, and commented on, the very self-same things.