The Best and The Worst Reviewed!

My thanks go to Nano Discussions of the My Little Reviews & Feedback group for reviewing my HBO series-inspired tale of Twilight and Celestia visiting the ruins of Chernobyl, grading it at 25/30 points.

If you haven't already, feel free to give the story a look. At 15.7k words, it's short and... well, 'sweet' probably isn't the right word for it, but you'll find it a compelling and suspenseful read.

EThe Best and The Worst

• MLP: FiM
• Dark
• Drama
• Mystery

Twilight Sparkle has seen some of the best of humanity during her visits to Earth. Now it is time she sees some of the worst...

• Crossover
• Alt. Universe
• Twilight
• Celestia

Firesight · 16k words  ·  116  7 · 2.7k views

Comments

[KMCA]

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A decision many fics in the past SHOULD have considered *cough cough Project Horizon cough cough*

[AJ Aficionado]

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People really do like their PH. I think it's the most popular spinoff of all time. That said a million words? Is this guy daft?

[KMCA]

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Oh I enjoyed it, but Somber could have cut over a third of it... hell, even half of it and have still had a book.

[Firesight]

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I feel like Nano Discussions criticisms were fair but I liked your story so much that I do feel a bit biased. My opinion still stands that my only real complaint was that the story was short. Its so good I wish there was more of it. But if it was much longer, it runs the risk of redundancy. Its a shame a great story has to end at a certain point to keep from ruining itself.

They were fair. I may yet make changes to address them. And yes, it was short, but that was kind of the point here. I was trying to make what was for me a rare short story and didn't want much extraneous in there. I did make one major mistake in its release--I should have reserved some chapters to release on subsequent days instead of publishing everything at once. That might have increased visibility over time have gained some more heat and readers as I went.

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A decision many fics in the past SHOULD have considered *cough cough Project Horizon cough cough*

Can't say I've read that, though I've certainly heard of it.