The Rewrites To Redemption · 12:01pm Jan 19th, 2020
Okay, so I posted three chapters and didn't realize it. I'm doing Re: 13 now and am getting deeper into Max's interactions with Velvet Breeze, which is... It's getting fun. It's basically the whole reason behind the rewrites; To revisit the story chapter by chapter and have more fun with every one of them. I've read through A Thief's Tale maybe... 6 times now? This being the seventh. Every time I read through it, I couldn't help but notice more and more that I wanted to change and now that I'm fuckin' 13 chapters deep in this bitch, I'll probably continue up until I get tired of touching the story up. When I start hitting the later chapters, say past 20 or so, I'll probably just add them back into the story since the early chapters were the ones that needed more love and motivation. However, I've already added a thousand words to the very first fucking scene in 13 and it's still going strong, so I don't know how much is going to get added in total. I just know that the magic's back and I want to skip ahead and redo 68-73 more than I want to touch a nice bum. Maybe a kindly hobo, maybe a big round butt.
Either way, I'm really glad that I've decided to nut up and make this happen. Here's to the first twelve being done, and hopefully the rest of the entire story
Cant wait to read the rewrite