• Member Since 18th Dec, 2014
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Masterius


Very fortunate to live in Baltimare, Mareland.

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  • 211 weeks
    I don't know about you...

    I don't know about you, but this is my idea of a perfect morning!

    (It would be even more perfect if I was snuggled up with her! :twilightblush:)

    2 comments · 208 views
  • 214 weeks
    Imagine seeing MLP like this!

    100% hologram!

    1 comments · 192 views
  • 215 weeks
    Double Trouble: The Flaws Within has been reviewed!

    Should anypony be interested, Cyonix from My Little Reviews & Feedback has done a rather in-depth review of Double Trouble: The Flaws Within1. You can read it it here:

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    3 comments · 212 views
  • 216 weeks
    Gone to the Dark Side

    Gone to the Dark Side...of sorts.

    Been saving up, and just bought a fitbit versa 2. Mostly--very mostly--for the heart and sleep monitoring functions...cuz when you have five sleep disorders, cardiac arrhythmia and AFib, well...

    ...inquiring minds just wanna know.

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    0 comments · 199 views
  • 217 weeks
    Not sure what happened...

    Not sure what happened, but I sat down to do some writing...

    I've absolutely no interest in writing, or reading, or anything, to thee point of mental and physical nauseau.

    Sorry, and forgive me.

    1 comments · 199 views
Jan
18th
2020

Sharpening the machete and honing the scalpel · 5:23pm Jan 18th, 2020

Well, the time has finally come, I’m afraid. The time every author must dread:

Editing.

No, no. Not editing as in “Boy, that’s a lot of missed commas” or “Can’t believe I misspelled [X] that many times!”.

No. Editing as in “Let’s whitewash some of the Sistine Chapel’s roof”.

Eh. It’s not quite that bad. However, based upon multiple comments, critiques, and observations (for instance: “Especially at the beginning of the story, you waste far too many words repeating things that have already happened in the show. It's basically pure exposition at this point.”) I’ve decided to go through the first three chapters and heavily edit them.

I wish that could be done using a paring knife, but it appears as if a machete is more applicable.

So if anyone wishes to keep a copy of the original 2-3 chapters, I’d do so before the start of February.

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