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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 50 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

    14 comments · 485 views
  • 51 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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    14 comments · 317 views
  • 52 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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    4 comments · 530 views
  • 53 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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    2 comments · 238 views
  • 53 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Nov
6th
2019

DING! · 4:45am Nov 6th, 2019

The great inspiration fairy has visited me, and has bequeathed me another chapter! Huzzah!

What I Am: Chapter XXXVIII

I haven't finished editing it yet, and I cannot guarantee that it will stay in it's current form. However, if you guys would like to take a look at it, tell me what I'm doing wrong, and how I can improve before publishing, then feel free! After all, you've stuck with me this long, you should know how my paranoid, self-doubting brain does these things by now!

As for the flag question, thank you all so much for your answers, it really helped me out, and I think I've figured out how I want the situation I planned to play out.

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Comments ( 7 )

Saw that literally in the first minute.

5151207 Yeah, you answered FAST!

Oooo this is gonna be sweet.

Hnnng, already read it and already hungry for more xP

I want to wait till its published on the story page before I read it. I wont be able to give my feedback but i want to read a finished chapter. This story that you've crafted, both versions, is worth it.

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