Sep
12th
2019
Currently rewriting bits and pieces of Regret! · 8:13pm Sep 12th, 2019
Looking back, I had a really weird writing style when I wrote this. Em dashes were just three hyphens, there were too many descriptions, and someone brought up a good point that the main character was pretty much using AJ as a rebound in case his attempts with Rainbow failed... and AJ was completely fine with it?
So... I wanna fix all that. And I already have in one chapter. Still working on tinkering with the others, but no more "Imma smash you AJ, but I also wanna smash RD." Because that's just silly.
Plus, less filler and more to the point story without being too to the point.
Aye, I can fully support your effort on this. It'll be fun rereading one of the very first Fanfictions I ever read on this site once some of the minor inconveniences have been ironed out. Have fun! ^^
AJ being okay with the rebound if Rainbow didn't work out struck me as quite unrealistic.
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Yeah, I'm surprised it took me this long to realize that.
Drunk sex. That'd be easy to put in too.