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Phoenix Nebula

Chaos is not the opposite of Harmony but apart of it. Both chaos and order together create a balance known as Harmony. Without one you cannot have have the other and without either there is nothing.

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  • 114 weeks
    What would make you cry.

    I'm talking about like something in a story? What would make you, as a reader, legitimately cry? For me have a very loved character die would be the best way to make me cry, or maybe something else tragic. Then again it doesn't have to be a sad cry it could be tears of joy, maybe seeing a character have a come back from a near defeat or even come back to life defying death it self.

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  • 122 weeks
    Immortaly =/= sadness

    This is one thing that constantly irritates me about Immortal Twilight stories, they always have Twilight become super miserable and depressed, or delve into dark magic to revive her friends. I get it's sad to lose friends, but what erks me is that this isn't a thing exclusive to immortal beings, last October my Grandfather died of cancer, my dog died about a month ago, my childhood doctor died

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  • 126 weeks
    No Mane 6 in M&M

    Like the title says I've decided to forget about having the rest of the mane 6 in the story I'm struggling to much with trying to write them in a way that doesn't have them appear as flat, 2-dimensional characters. So yeah no mane six in their place I'll try and add other characters that don't have much in the way of personality that I can just build from scratch for the most part, like

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    17 comments · 420 views
  • 126 weeks
    Moon and Magic is not dead!

    Like the title says! I have not abandoned M&M and I don't ever plan to, I unfortunately, had to cancel Imperfect due to issues in my personal life, but M&M has no ties to my Personal life so it's safe and will be continued. I haven't been able to continue it do to life still because well I have to work so my bank account is not 0 and I have other projects that I'm working on. One of these

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    6 comments · 360 views
  • 134 weeks
    My Favorite Story and the One I want to continue the most.

    Redemption of a Broken mare.

    Okay, there's my favorite, bye!

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My magic system! · 2:11am Sep 10th, 2019

Starting in April I started writing in a document on a magic system I plan to use in my stories (Esspetialy MaM) and for others to use in their own stories as well. However, like practically everything I ever write I got stuck and later found that it needs more improvement. That is why I'm posting a sharable link to the google document that anyone can view and comment on! I'm hoping that some of you can give me some input on what I have done so far and help me better refine my magic system.

Before you proceed, however, I must explain the goal of my magic system. My goal is to create a magic system with clear and consistent rules that still allow for flexibility for anyone to use in their own stories. In short, I don't want it to be overly complex to be confusing but not so simple that it's limiting in what an author can do with it. With that being said here is the link.

This is relevant to MaM because this is the magic system I have been using for that story, as incomplete as it is. So I feel that most of my readers for that story would like to know how it works and give their own input. (I know that Stainless Steel Fox will want to give imput on the magical artifact system for this one)

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Comments ( 4 )

I might try it for one of mine. No promises though. I'll read it for sure.

Yeah, feel free to use it and even tweak it.

Yeah this seems really interesting in how everything works

I’m interested in the whole magic rules thing so I’ll give it a look. Also, I like to fix spelling and grammar mistakes I see, so hopefully that won’t irritate you too much if I find any.

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