An embarrassing update · 8:41am Sep 6th, 2019
So, not much of a big update. I just completed doing a big review and update of chapters 5 through 16. I went back again and made a lot of corrections to some of the grammar, spelling, and punction mistakes I made. My god was it embarrassing seeing all the mistakes I made. Much of this is in response to LucarioFan2066 pointing out some very stupid mistakes I missed when I first published those chapters.
I had only done some "soft" edits to those chapters because my major focus was one putting out new chapters having those new ones come out more polished. I have to wonder if one of the reasons there seems to be such a large dropoff of people starting to read and losing interest, or even at least half of the thumb downvotes was because of my poor editing skills at the time.
Granted, I think I've come a long way since I first started, having a better understanding writing structure and how to better review my work, it still feels bad seeing how unprofessional those chapters were presented. Part of the problem being that I seem to think faster than I can type. That often ends up causing me to skip over words, use the wrong tense, or in some cases, forget to put in the closing command behind bold or italic scripts in the dialog sections of my story. Plus, Grammarly has made vast improvements in its error detection since I first started using it.
For those of you have who have overlooked these glaring mistakes, I think you for continuing to read my story. An even bigger thank you for those who have pointed out my mistakes so that I have a more complete and readable story for the readers to follow along with.
I can only hope that my future endeavors continue to keep you entertained with far fewer annoyances of the simple mistakes I fail to catch before hitting the Publish button.
I think faster then I type too, which is a serious problem. Since half the time, when I reread my own work, I'm like "Who the fuck wrote this!?". But then I realize, "Oh, that was me......Christ almighty.....this is trash!".
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Yeah. Pretty much I go over it again and it kinda hurts and I can't help but kick myself.
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At least you have been writing. I got a 1000 words into my next chapter and just....stopped for what ever reason. What I have is ok, but I'm sorta stuck. I'm mixed about how I want to lead my story. Not to mention, my skill probably has diminished greatly due to the lack of writing.