A week? Really? · 6:55am Jul 21st, 2019
Thank you to all who have given 'The Fractured' a chance and read it as chapters have been posted.
I would be interested in hearing any thoughts about it, pity I mistakenly disabled the comments when I created it for submission. Meh, my fault. (And I figured it out. Sigh...)
It has been a long week with 'The Fractured' being one of two works I have been finalising. Sadly, the other is not pony related and, as such, will not be posted here. Instead, it is headed into an unpublished manuscript competition. We'll see what happens...
Maybe as things calm down again I will have inspiration for another pony piece while working on another non-pony manuscript.
Tael
The story's interesting, so far. Some elements I'm undecided on what to think, but most should become more clear to me with further development.
I'm kind of okay with the protagonist being disabled, because not everything should be beautiful and symmetrical, but I'll still -- probably vainly -- hope that Monochrome/Selene makes a full recovery.