Chapter 24, and a little bit more... Romance? · 7:50pm Jul 8th, 2019
Would you look at that? Another chapter out and it didn't even take me over a month this time; small victories. But yeah I had a lot of back and forth with this chapter in how it dealt with Cerb and his PTSD.
I don't want it to be such a big focus, but it's also a big part of his character that he has to both deal with and overcome. However, it also gives a greater level of importance to the relationship and value those two will hold to him. Also, for anyone who has had to deal with others, or even knows of the struggles some go through, the frequency and severity aren't too far off; if not under-represented.
The rest I loved. And the next chapter is going to be so much better with a lot more positive content.
But, I'd love to hear what you think.