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JonasHoliday44


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  • 211 weeks
    Story Review 6

    Woah, It has been 41 weeks since my last story review. That's way to close to a year.
    Spoilers!
    Today we are reviewing Sweetie by: Stolen Memes.

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    2 comments · 155 views
  • 223 weeks
    Update

    Well. It's been a while, I'm honestly not sure when I was last online. But rest assured I am not dead! I know it has been a while but my reviewing skills are just as good as ever! And that's probably one too many exclamation points but, Whatever.
    Just a few things First off. I do realize that I should put spoiler warnings on all of my reviews. I will go back and do that.

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    0 comments · 138 views
  • 253 weeks
    Story review 5

    Well, It has been close to 2 weeks at this point. I do apologize. I had planned to do this on Monday, but stuff got in the way. (Excuses Excuses)
    WARNING-SPOILERS AHEAD
    Again, this is my opinion.
    Today I am going with a pretty underrated story from another relatively established author.

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    1 comments · 250 views
  • 254 weeks
    Story Review 4

    Woah I'm on a roll with these, I guess I'm trying to make up for my 2-week absence.
    As always This is my opinion.
    WARNING-SPOILERS AHEAD
    Today we are going to a pretty established author, I would love to review some of his other stories, but as of current, I am trying to perfect my ability to write reviews of chaptered stories.

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    4 comments · 252 views
  • 255 weeks
    Story Review 3

    Another one.
    Disclaimer: This is my opinion
    Today I'm coming back with a pretty short story, It has slightly over 1k words.
    Today's story is The voice in Sweetie Belle's head By Puppycornashlynn
    WARNING-SPOILERS AHEAD

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    2 comments · 252 views
Jul
4th
2019

Story review 2 · 2:23am Jul 4th, 2019

Holy shit its been 2 weeks. I'm sorry guys I just kind of forgot I did this.
Once again this is my opinion so take it with a grain of salt.
WARNING-SPOILERS AHEAD
This story is probably overdone but who cares?
The story is Sweetest day ever By Ellie_
The story starts with A conversation between Scootaloo and her mom, It's just a normal conversation nothing really special.
Scootaloo rides off, and this is where the plot kicks in, As Scootaloo runs into none other than Sweetie Belle. Their interaction ignites feeling in Scootaloo or nerves as they are described in the story. She goes to the library and talks to Twilight, but that's not important. We then cut to Scootaloo talking to Rainbow Dash, This is where Rainbow tells her that she is in Love with Sweetie, Rainbow encourages her, and then she sets out to find Sweetie.

She ends up finding Sweetie singing by a fountain, Scootaloo does some clumsy shit, And they have a cute little conversation mainly revolving around, Properly introducing themselves, and talking about going to Diamond Tiara's party that is coincidentally later that night. Then they ride off to the party together. They arrive and find that Diamond Tiara is calling Apple Jack a freak For being lesbian, After a little bit of dialogue, Sweetie decides to jump in to defend Apple Jack too, It probably should be noted that Rarity and Apple Jack are dating. Diamond calls Scootaloo a dike makes fun of her a little more and then Sweetie kisses Scootaloo.

This isn't the actual ending to the story, but you will just have to read the end for yourself.
Overall this is a very cute Scootabelle story. And overall I say go read it.
My rating 8 out of 10

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