Story Review 3 · 10:00pm Jul 7th, 2019
Another one.
Disclaimer: This is my opinion
Today I'm coming back with a pretty short story, It has slightly over 1k words.
Today's story is The voice in Sweetie Belle's head By Puppycornashlynn
WARNING-SPOILERS AHEAD
The story starts with Sweetie Waking up and hearing a voice in her head. Also, The word "Blunk" is used which I do not believe is the correct word. the rest of the first paragraph is relatively uneventful, It's just Sweetie and the voice questioning each other, Also Sweetie nicknames the voice "Belle" so I will be referring to the voice as such from now on.
Next, we join Sweetie walking to school. Her and the voice continue to talk to each other, Sweetie has an awkward interaction with the crusaders, and she runs off. Scootaloo follows, also Sweetie and Scoots are dating so yeah, that wasn't intentional I promise. They talk to each other and Scootaloo believes her and they walk off. School is normal, they take a test and Belle Annoys Sweetie, etc.
The last bit gets a little bit... Hazy? After Sweetie goes to sleep, Belle gets a visit from Luna, This is where it gets a little odd. Luna asks Belle what she remembers of her past life, Belle doesn't remember anything. then Luna shows her something.
Overall this was an odd story, but I liked it.
My final score: 7 out of 10
Make sure you go read it for yourself!
Thank you for reviewing it!
I kinda got out of ideas at the end I think. I randomly got this idea overnight lol.
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